That was really really great. I love it ^^
Very nice job, very nice.

Well, I'm glad that Bryce recovered! This story has been an emotional rollercoaster, and as usual, I'm sad to see it go. But I always have another story from you to look forward to...so you'd better deliver! ;)

aw! I loved it!! it was so cute! The whole thing made me smile (and cry...but sh thats a secret! :p lol) Can't wait 2 read more of ur stories! :)

Hi,

I rarely review, but after I finished this, I had to let you know just how great it was. I'm incredibly impressed - this story wouldn't let me go until I finished it. I was feeling the emotion of the story pretty intensely. I'm impressed that this is your first n/g effort - it's now one of my favorites!

~Nicki

this was such a great story!

Aw, I loved it. A perfect ending. ^_^

Sorry I haven't had time to review the last few chapters, I've been super busy with school and stuff... But I made time for the last chapter. =)

LOL at Bryce on a camel.

Those previews are great... I especially liked the sound of War Games. Can't wait for that.

Until then... Thank you for taking the time to write this wonderful story. ^_^

x

i like the sneak previews... you are now on my author alert (unless of course you were before...)


im so happy i managed to read this before i disapear for a while.

i really do like the previews... (even though ive said that before)

its nice that bryce survived, i like how you made it look like she had died (and i think it is hilarious that grissom didnt know about greg and nick! it was brilliant when he took off his glasses and wiped them...)

the end snippet of sins of a fther is hilarious, the girl cop quip!

face of the world... (just wondering is this part of a series, i loved it but i was a little confused...
the way sarahs father died was interesting, i liked the hat bit

he bleeds for greg? i think i sense nick!

war games...

i like the past history in this fic, there is definately more to greg than meets the eye... love it!

Aww. That was a really good ending. It was nicely understated, and happy. I'm just kinda surprised that Sara wasn't there. Thanks for putting up another amazing story! Yours are always absolutely perfect!

I know I should be all anxious and stuff because Bryce might still, y'know, die, but I can't, because I'm still giggling over how Greg talked to Gary. It was really funny.
Oh, I also LOVED Sarah's opinion on homosexuality. That is so going on my homepage!

Ah cliffy! Great chapter, love the Love stuff. Great moment between the two of them. Every conversation and scene in this is perfect and impeccable. Can't wait for the next update!

eek, now that is a cliffie, i love your dream sequences, they are brilliantly done! i absolutely love them!

nick and greg are definately very cute in this chapter, i loved their dialogue and interaction especially when nick asked if greg wanted to be with bryce - the tension - but it all worked out and then;

“Please let her be OK. Please. Just let her be OK.”

ouch! but also very sweet, i also liked the breakdown at the start of how everyone would react if bryce died

im heading off soon. so i hope to read the epilogue before i go away for a bit, because if i dotn it may be a while till i can -sigh - still, absence makes the heart grow fonder

This story is extremely goo, and I am lucky 2 have found it. It's just damn good! Keep up the good work. Also, i'm subscribing 2 u, so if u eva wtite another story i'll kno!

greg was scary in his conviction...

i loved this bit;

I was going to be polite and take your couch, but if you insist

and this bit;

“I don’t want to have all this hope just to have it be shattered. I’d rather be pleasantly surprised.”


im happy someone seems to share my opinion on things, that is my opinion on life and exams and everything basically

bryce will live, oh btw i think its sweet that everyone has seems to suggest that warrick and nick might have...

Very awesome chapter. Very nice ^^

Well, I wasn't really expecting Greg to beat the crap out of Mario..but I'm glad he did! I hope Bryce doesn't die; I'm pretty certain you'll give us a mildly happy ending, right? The best part of this chapter was Greg pretending to be a drug addict. Hands down.
Can't wait for more! Update soon, please. :)