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xXxSapphireJewelxXx
2009-06-22 . chapter 4
Oh my god this story is absolutly beautiful! It is sad in a way because they were both trapped but it was also a rather bitter-sweet ending. They both found comfort in each other and died peacefully with each other in the end. It's very rare for me to read a story and sit in my chair numb and frozen and think to myself 'That was one damn good story!' This was just an amazing story overall and I envy your writing style. You kept me reading to the very end! Great Job^^
MrsHellman
2008-11-08 . chapter 4
I don't think you understand how amazing this story was? I was nearly crying because you pout so much emotios in it, it was just like Titanic, but it was as if you wrote about two other people who were onboard that ship.

I wish that I could write this amazing! You should continue to write like this, I gotta check if you've got some more fics I'll fall for as hard as I fell for this one :D Totally amazing! It wasn't even rushed! Even though this story only contained 4 chapters you made ti so believable... it's scary you know! Competely amazing...

~mi
Artificial Starlight
2008-09-06 . chapter 4
This story was amazing! I cannot thank you enough for writing such a great piece. Especially since it was Titanic, but not the regular "Rose = Sasuke, Jack = Naruto" or vise versa.

The movie was great but there are just so many fictions about them being substituted as the Naruto characters. It's nice to read a side-story of the Great Ship Sink of 1912.

And the personalities were spot on, nice writing. Conclusion: I love it! Definitely a favorite. -thumbs up-
Skullera
2008-09-02 . chapter 4
That was a really horryfing ending... I am crying right now as i'm writing this. Truly heartbreaking that they felt that the only way they could acheive the freedom they both wanted so much was to die together in each other's arms...

I read the last part of this chapter somehow knowing that they were going to die like that. I couldn't help but remeber the scene of the old couple who did just that or the mother who sang her children to sleep waiting for the sea to flood into their rooms.

I loved the story and the build of emotions and reltationship beateen the two.

Most of all i think i loved that you simply did not re-write the story of the Titanic with Naruto and Sasuke playing the parts... After all where is the fun in reading a story to which you already know what is going to happen?

Thank you for sharing this with us and i hope to read more from you.
SoSickOfNyQuil
2008-06-21 . chapter 4
that ending...was inspiring =]
Astharoche
2008-06-17 . chapter 4
omg...im actually crying...i dont really like when they die but it sad and good that sasuke got what he wished and naruto sticked with him till the very end of it(im actually crying while writing this) is a very good and tragic story but good nontheless...
Hime-Miko-Love
2008-06-17 . chapter 4
I love your story!! WA! It was so sad! I thought that besides making them die you could have made them continue living but in secret together. Or maybe an afterlife story about those two. WA! It was so sad!
Thanks for the story anyway! ^^
Alis rein silvervine
2008-06-15 . chapter 4
this is a great story! pity that the both of them died...i wanted to cry...
heather
2008-06-15 . chapter 4
that was one of the most beautiful peaces ever. i am acually crying. you have some real talet. this is probibly one of the only storys that i will remember forever. amazing work.
Icetea17
2008-06-15 . chapter 4
Oh it's so sad. I almost cried. I thought that they might use the chaos of the sinking to escape and let everyone think that they died, but they really could just be free. But they died...
Pahoyhoy
2008-06-15 . chapter 4
It doesn't matter how many times I read it. This story still amazes me. Gah! You make me so emotional.
deadanimals
2008-06-15 . chapter 4
you made me cry i had to wait a few minutes to review b/c i was crying hard... but i love how naruto and sasuke died^^ ( i think that im going cry again) I like this better then Titanic^^ thinks for letting us read you love story^^ and i like the epilogue^^ i was happy and sad but i was happy that sasuke got his wish and that naruto stayed with him^^ and sad b/c of sasuke and itachi parents were in denial... bye^^
deadanimals
2008-06-14 . chapter 3
sweetness^^ love it hope you update soon^^
BennyPeace
2008-06-11 . chapter 3
Oh, this is interesting. Very. I like it a lot so far.
deadanimals
2008-06-06 . chapter 2
a very good chapter!! hope you update soon!! i cant wait to read what going to happen next!! hehe... till then
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