I like it but i think it can past for T rated. It's not like you went into details *pouts* (lol)

nice job :3

Man, I haven't been able to get this story out of my head since the first time I read it over a month ago. I don't know if it's because of your writing or how the characters are, but every time I think about Shugo Chara fanfiction, this story always creeps into my subconscious. Kudos for writing such an unforgetable scene.

Nicely done on characterization. Rather short but perfect for a one-shot. All in all, I liked it.

Oh well...at least it show how much he wanted Amu...
ANother chapter please?

OMG!
It made me KYAA but at the same time I was like UTAU THAT BIATCH!

I can´t believe you ma- Incest is WRONG dude! But you´re a good writer, please make an Amuto one!

very nicely done, can't wait for more...strange enough I always thought this might happen in the real story

this is the best story ever, you just must make an 2th ch...

You should write a story about Ikuto masturbating, while feeling guilty for thinking about Amu. (Bonus points if she's still 11. XD)

you call this complete! ! ! pch T-T

I know, I know...they're siblings, but it was a good story and it kind of makes sense. Amu is way too young for that kind of stuff.

I know that it´s wrong cause their siblings but all in all, good writing! :)

Um...yeah...he only wishes Amu was older that way it was her right? Cuz I mean that is wrong! They're Blood related!

SO wrong! Utau is his BLOOD SISTER!