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ChipFest
2009-09-08 . chapter 4
hey! i love the first few chapters to this story...! :)
ahm... are you planning on finishing it? i am itching to read the rest =D
hope you can update soon!
cheerio,
chip~
edenforest1
2009-07-04 . chapter 4
that was adorable. i wonder what naruto gonna do! plz update soon! thank you very much!
GoldxSilence
2009-06-05 . chapter 4
aw man! I HATE CLIFFIES! THIS WHOLE STORY IS GOOD! I LOVED THE FIRST ONE TOO! HURRY AND WRITE MORE!
Bookoholic
2009-04-13 . chapter 4
Hm... I like it, it's very funny and I am a humngeous fan of Sasuke being uke. Your story actually made my day so thank you. ^-^ Keep going I wanna see which girl they're gonna choose...it's Hinata isn't it. If not, I suggest it, she doesn't like Sasuke anyway, she's sweet and believable enough for Itachi and Fukaku, bastards, also she's in relation to Neji so it could be easy to find her.

...oops, sorry I'm rambling, your story not mine, but if you ever need a beta give me a ring-a-ding-ding. XD
Nayeli
2009-01-10 . chapter 4
YAY, me like the sequel a lot!^_^

can't wait for ur next update, cuz i really want to know what happens with this girlfriend thingy and everything!XD

Hope u update soon!;P
just for torture
2008-12-20 . chapter 4
wau :)
Bacontheft
2008-12-09 . chapter 4
what? it ended!? good god woman! you must update, i'm so excited to see what happens next x3 (oh and much appreciated that lemon)
Itachi. Oh Enka.
2008-12-02 . chapter 4
Awh..

Sasuke has no faith in his lover XD Typical..
Very interesting story. I like it.
Cross - The Damned Alchemist
2008-11-29 . chapter 4
YAY! A SEQUEL! >.< I can't wait for more! >w< OH! OH! OH! I wonder who Narito has in mind for 'Sasuke's Girlfriend'! >.< Please update soon! ^^~
olivovova
2008-09-06 . chapter 4
great,great
cloud nova
2008-08-31 . chapter 4
please update soon... its getting interesting
x-NatPeaceOut-x
2008-08-30 . chapter 4
Yay! Yay! Yay! So glad you didn't abandon the sequel! (I would have, too much effort lol). This rocks! As much as I loved the first version, this is much better, and less angsty, good for me seeing as angsty stuff makes me real depressed, no matter how good it is plot wise. No, seriously, this rocks. I love it. I do have one tiny itsy bitsy request however; more fluffy love and stuff between Naruto and Sasuke! It's realistic, and I don't want you to go overboard and destroy your awesome story by using my suggestion, but I would like to see a softer side in the two of them towards each other. Other than that, great story. LOVE YOU!
cajega
2008-08-15 . chapter 4
ooh, this is so good!
lemons are great and evil-big-brother-itachi-plot is even better :D
Yumeoni
2008-08-14 . chapter 4
You...you updated...
-cries tears of joy-
I'M SO HAPPY!
...-cough-
I mean
'bout time hoe!
It was shortly good.
DemonRogue
2008-08-12 . chapter 4
the chapter was a good one. Short, but good.
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