I love this story but I was expecting Ichigo to be like a loving brother towards his sister(s), I personaly like it that way but since its your story do what want! =] Please update soon!

things are heating up!! Ichigo is such as **!! he is so mean!! I want to know what happens next so update soon!! xoxoxoxxo

Its a promising story and cant wait for more but ichigo was very ooc in parts.

its ok... i think,. the plot seems promising, but u just have a few grammatical errors, and try to lessen the OOCness of ichigo.
over all, its a good read. just get a beta.

please update this soon...!!

i really like it,...!!

i want to know what will happen next...!

Please keep going i like where this is going!

Awesome! What else is there to say?

i can tell its going to turn into a hell of a good story! pls update soon!!

i love love it

Ohh! Its a wonderful concept! Please update soon! :)

i think it will make an interesting story. cant wait for the next chapter.