RUN ON SENTENCE OVERLOAD!

And... well the punctuation was perfect. I hate it when transliteration of Japanese is added in instead of plain english. it's unecessary... The kiss was compeltely out of no where? glad it happened though , hehehe.

Otherwise it had good setting, okay description... :) keep at it!

I LOVE THIS STORY! It was very very Kawaii! ♥

Yorihisa/Akane is my very favorite couple in Harukanaru Toki no Naka De! :D