Oh my goodness, This has got to be the best story yet. I have to stop reading these at work, everyone want to know why I have tears in my eyes... LOVED IT.
Neh, not a fan of christian heavenly crap (hell, how can you describe a reality that only exists for a soul?) but it's good. That's my main beef, but it's tricky, ya know? Anyway, continue to update, ja ne.