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| saragillie 2008-06-29 ch 1, | abuseI like your version of events... that Zach was blackmailed... much better than the show's. |
| bonesluva101 2008-06-07 ch 1, | abuseOH MY GOD! THATS WHAT SHOULD HAPPEN IN THE TV SERISE! I MEAN SERIOUSLY THEY CANT DO THAT TO ZACK! HES GOING TO COME BACK SOMETIME, HOPEFULLY LIKE IN UR STORY!! |
| SquintyEye 2008-06-02 ch 1, | abuseIt's not bad at all. There are a few spelling errors and awkwardly worded sentences that could easily be fixed. I love the concept and am thrilled to find more fics out there that let Zack off the hook-- Gosh, I hated that finale! All in all, I would say good job. I like the premise of the story and think, for the most part, you did a fair job of telling it. :) |
| Bella1992 2008-05-31 ch 1, | abuseAww! This would be so much better then what happened. I still cannot believe they did that to Zack. It was like the writers were in a rush and they couldn't come up with anything better... Anyways, this is really good. :) Love Zack. Bella1992 |
| xHodgepodgex 2008-05-31 ch 1, | abuseIf the real story was like this it would make more sense. Poor Zacaroni -_- Only thing is a few accidental spelling mistakes e.g tired in stead of tried. Nevertheless + fave! |