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saragillie
2008-06-29
ch 1,
abuseI like your version of events... that Zach was blackmailed... much better than the show's.
bonesluva101
2008-06-07
ch 1,
abuseOH MY GOD! THATS WHAT SHOULD HAPPEN IN THE TV SERISE! I MEAN SERIOUSLY THEY CANT DO THAT TO ZACK! HES GOING TO COME BACK SOMETIME, HOPEFULLY LIKE IN UR STORY!!
SquintyEye
2008-06-02
ch 1,
abuseIt's not bad at all. There are a few spelling errors and awkwardly worded sentences that could easily be fixed. I love the concept and am thrilled to find more fics out there that let Zack off the hook-- Gosh, I hated that finale!

All in all, I would say good job. I like the premise of the story and think, for the most part, you did a fair job of telling it. :)
Bella1992
2008-05-31
ch 1,
abuseAww! This would be so much better then what happened. I still cannot believe they did that to Zack. It was like the writers were in a rush and they couldn't come up with anything better...

Anyways, this is really good. :)
Love Zack.
Bella1992
xHodgepodgex
2008-05-31
ch 1,
abuseIf the real story was like this it would make more sense. Poor Zacaroni -_-
Only thing is a few accidental spelling mistakes e.g tired in stead of tried. Nevertheless + fave!
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