Le cute! It certainly deserves all the reviews it's gotten. I greatly applaud your creativity and romanticism that you put into this semi-sequel! Simply adorable!

I love the picture of Venice you have painted.

Sarah should know better than to try and beat Jareth at something he undoubtedly has decades of more experience at than she does. That pendant - was it Jareth's own dreams?

Wow!! If ou haven't started your own book by now I do not know what you are waiting for!! This is the best sequel of Labyrinth I've ever read. I LOVED the burning roses, how you understood both Jareth and Sarah so deeply that you managed to pull this off.

Basically, this story just cost me two nights in a row of no sleep, but I tell you, it was completely worth it.

It is no exaggeration when I say that I want this printed, bound, and on my bookshelf.

You. You are amazing and wonderful and talented. I would gush endlessly, but I think I'm going to collapse happily onto my bed instead.

Thank you a million times over.

Yes. YES. This piece is all that a good story should be.

What can I say that I've not already said? You broke my heart...then taught me to hope again. This has been a journey I shall never forget; a glorious three nights of anticipation, wonderment and intrigue. I...I have nothing more to say other than...thank you. Thank you! Thank you a thousand times for this adventure brilliant adventure!

Without a doubt, I shall return to reread this masterpiece.

So until then, arrivederci!

--Illusion of the Mirror--

I am... ...depressed beyond words. I don't think I have ever audibly uttered "No" while reading a fanfiction before.
Now if you will excuse me, I am going to retire to my bedroom and cry.

This was an incredibly insightful bit of prose. Your musings (through dear Sarah) pertaining to a Father's love and the nature of striving for and attaining dreams is so well-thought out and deep. I felt as though I was not only reading for pleasure, but also learning.

"Don't trifle with me. I'm apt to become violent."
I'm going to have to use that line. n_n This is like an entirely different story inside of the original! I must say, that I'm enjoying the historical aspect of this, being that I'm a huge European History buff. I look forward to seeing this play out.
And now, onward! To more shenanigans and tomfoolery!

You're not the only one who cries during those commercials! Sometimes there's nothing wrong with being a sap. ^^

This chapter had me on the edge of my seat. I just couldn't stop reading because I had to know what happened next! The description of the garden was enchanting. I could see, feel, hear, smell and even taste its authenticity. Brilliant work!

OMG I love this story so hard! It's perfect. Seriously.

What an enthralling and unique story. I believe that you have, so far, done the world of Labyrinth justice. You've weaved a tale of danger, beauty and intrigue that has kept me "turning the pages," if you will. If I hadn't been so eager to read on, I would have been reviewing at the end of each chapter.
And so, I must continue on! It's nearly 3 AM and I have to be up by 7.

Your vivid picture of the Labyrinth this time around is stunningly original. It's a feast for the imagination! I am growing ever more attached the Chaucer. The bit with the roses was beautifully horrifying, if that makes any sense. Superb work so far. I am anxious to keep reading.

This was an amazing story. Riveting and poignant. It made me cry and laugh at various points (especially the fruit basket comment). I chanced a peek at your Bio and saw you are on permanent hiatus (although I don't know if you can use the term hiatus if its permanent :P) so I don't know if you even still read comments about your stories. The whole story was amazing and the ending was spectacular (I'm even going to look up the original one, if I can still find it). I'm a bit loath to read the sequel since it looks as if it is unfinished, but I think I will because your writing is amazing; and whatever compelling story may be laid out in 8 chapters is probably worth reading. I just wanted to congratulate you on a story well done (the epilogue is great too!). If you write more I will be sure to read it, but if not, it was a enough that you graced us with your stories.