 Victoria 2009-11-20 . chapter 14 I was deeply touched by your beautifully heartbreaking story. I cried on chapter 14 and I cried more on the last chapter. I-I'm simply speechless. I have spent reading this two days. It was worth of every second. Before I strted to read the last chapter, I had dinner. I could not eat, I was shocked, my stomatch hurt, my eyes were full of tears. :'(
You shown characters so good, their emotions and acts, their fears and dreams. The landscape was potraited so good, too. I expecially loved how you represented Jareth, cold and cruel on the outside, while he's heart and soul were gentle and kind - innocent. I love his arrogance. I love the way he loved Sarah... Ok, all. ;)I must mention that he's dream to be ordinary human and free... is...so sweet ;) Aw.
I like Sarah, that she would save her friends and Brian first, all over again, with or without knowing that Jareth would reincarnate. Which is brave, and a bit sad/tragic. 'Cause she sacrifised herself - losing the love of her life. I also like that she didn't change. New characters are wonderful, like the old ones too. ;)
At the end of chapter 13 and at the begining o chapter 14, I was affraid that you'll make this a tragic story. I was so relieved when Brian saw him in the club. I don't like tragic (love) stories. I think thats because of the *books you have to read in school* (can't remember the word for it, I don't live in English-speaking country. So, if there's phrases you won't understand, I'm sorry), most of that books were tragic love. Well, the writers from my country can't imagine a love story if the lovers aren't tragic. O__o I'm sick of that. I also thank you for - Sarah is not with Brian. It was such a relief when he finally give up. XD
Story is very perfect. I would love to see it published. But it's a fanfic (which I find hardly to admit after reading this),so.. :(
I whish I could see Jareth remember Sarah. That would be a ultimate joy for me. I still fell pain inside me (better to say - that I'm still deeply touched), and I think the tears will fall again from my eyes. But, at least, they're together. That will be enough. I wish them happy ever after.
And I must thank you on one more thing. After readig this, my inspiration came back. I'm working on a book myself, and or few days I couldn't write. Now I can. Thank you. <3
It seems I have to thanks you on one more thing (I'm becoming boring, lol); thank you for giving such an incredible sequel to my forever favourite movie.
Thank you from the bottom of my heart,
Victoria |
 CelticAngelWings 2009-11-18 . chapter 14Simply...Magnificent. This entire fanfic, was simply MAGNIFICENT. You did a WONDERFUL JOB ON EACH AND EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER! MOU! *glomps authoress* I NOW ADORE YOU!
I would say more, but I feel that anymore words after this point would only sound terribly redundant and cheap, so I'll just leave you in peace now.
Thank you oh so very much for writing this fanfic, I enjoyed it from start to finish!
Until we meet again,
TAKE CARE! ARRIVEDERCI CARA!
Yours Truly,
CelticAngelWings~ C.A.W!
The one and ONLY! ^_~
LONG LIVE JARETH AND SARAH!! WOOT!! WOOT!! *throws confetti into the air* |
 Dragon Ashes 2009-11-09 . chapter 14Le cute! It certainly deserves all the reviews it's gotten. I greatly applaud your creativity and romanticism that you put into this semi-sequel! Simply adorable! |
 Barranca 2009-09-19 . chapter 11I love the picture of Venice you have painted. |
 Barranca 2009-09-19 . chapter 6Sarah should know better than to try and beat Jareth at something he undoubtedly has decades of more experience at than she does. That pendant - was it Jareth's own dreams? |
 ShimmeringWater 2009-09-16 . chapter 14Wow!! If ou haven't started your own book by now I do not know what you are waiting for!! This is the best sequel of Labyrinth I've ever read. I LOVED the burning roses, how you understood both Jareth and Sarah so deeply that you managed to pull this off. |
 faithful muse 2009-09-12 . chapter 14Basically, this story just cost me two nights in a row of no sleep, but I tell you, it was completely worth it.
It is no exaggeration when I say that I want this printed, bound, and on my bookshelf.
You. You are amazing and wonderful and talented. I would gush endlessly, but I think I'm going to collapse happily onto my bed instead.
Thank you a million times over. |
 Illusion of the Mirror 2009-09-11 . chapter 14Yes. YES. This piece is all that a good story should be.
What can I say that I've not already said? You broke my heart...then taught me to hope again. This has been a journey I shall never forget; a glorious three nights of anticipation, wonderment and intrigue. I...I have nothing more to say other than...thank you. Thank you! Thank you a thousand times for this adventure brilliant adventure!
Without a doubt, I shall return to reread this masterpiece.
So until then, arrivederci!
--Illusion of the Mirror-- |
 Illusion of the Mirror 2009-09-11 . chapter 13I am... ...depressed beyond words. I don't think I have ever audibly uttered "No" while reading a fanfiction before.
Now if you will excuse me, I am going to retire to my bedroom and cry. |
 Illusion of the Mirror 2009-09-11 . chapter 12This was an incredibly insightful bit of prose. Your musings (through dear Sarah) pertaining to a Father's love and the nature of striving for and attaining dreams is so well-thought out and deep. I felt as though I was not only reading for pleasure, but also learning. |
 Illusion of the Mirror 2009-09-11 . chapter 11"Don't trifle with me. I'm apt to become violent."
I'm going to have to use that line. n_n This is like an entirely different story inside of the original! I must say, that I'm enjoying the historical aspect of this, being that I'm a huge European History buff. I look forward to seeing this play out.
And now, onward! To more shenanigans and tomfoolery! |
 Illusion of the Mirror 2009-09-11 . chapter 10You're not the only one who cries during those commercials! Sometimes there's nothing wrong with being a sap. ^^ |
 Illusion of the Mirror 2009-09-11 . chapter 8This chapter had me on the edge of my seat. I just couldn't stop reading because I had to know what happened next! The description of the garden was enchanting. I could see, feel, hear, smell and even taste its authenticity. Brilliant work! |
 fiducia 2009-09-11 . chapter 14OMG I love this story so hard! It's perfect. Seriously. |
 Illusion of the Mirror 2009-09-11 . chapter 7What an enthralling and unique story. I believe that you have, so far, done the world of Labyrinth justice. You've weaved a tale of danger, beauty and intrigue that has kept me "turning the pages," if you will. If I hadn't been so eager to read on, I would have been reviewing at the end of each chapter.
And so, I must continue on! It's nearly 3 AM and I have to be up by 7. |
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