I like this story...the format with the short, simple sentences is perfect for the uncomplicated Emmett. Chapter 2 was a bummer though...I understand perfectly your frustration with not getting any reviews, but surely you can think of something better than blackmailing reviewers with taking your story down? That's like cutting off your nose to spite your face.

i have decided that the world needs more Emmett stories.

It is well written, avoid using words like: cool, fun, bad, and nice. You get what i mean.. a well used thesaurusus is the key to sucess.

please continue...

I like it please don't delete it!! It's really good! Please please please please PLEASE DON'T DELETE IT!

-Lori-