Hahaha.
I really like this story.
I found it posted on LiveJournal and I ahd no idea how I missed it when looking for fanfics on here.
I liked how you started the story off with the future Heroes and then went to how they met.
Loved the ending of this chapter, so freakin' funny.
Can't wait for an update!

I love ur story! I hope u can update it when u can.

ROTFL! Please update soon!

haha! Nice, like it, how you've just gone back, and then the few you mentioned at the beginning (I was trying to work out who Holly was) become instantly relevant! The warren/OC slant you've taken is really unusual, and it makes your stroy stand out, I likes it lots! I think you've captured their characters really well :D
Keep writing!
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This is really good, can't wait for more, please update soon

Can't wait for more! extremely funny!

love it

Great! Can't wait for more!

I really like Dakota, she seems like a really spunky girl. And her powers are so awesome, they kind of remind me of Piper Halliwell's powers from the show 'Charmed'.
Anyway, I really hope you update soon!

This was excellent Jade, I'd not read it before, but I'm glad I did! Loved it! Hope you update soon!

Ah, this is so good, Jade!

You have to continue! I love it!

Warren is such an awesome character any way, but this story is probably going to make me like him more, lol.

And I'm loving Dakota so far. Haven't seen much of her, but I can't wait to learn more about her.

Also...the story behind Willow's name is genius, lol.

I'm very interested to see how this goes, and its nice to have an original begining to a story, well done with not putting in too many kids, they cant half get confusing!

Cant wait for you to update!

very nice, definatly a good story in the makeing

Good chapter, very interesting. Can't wait for more :)

This looks really interesting. At the beginning of the chapter I was afraid it would be all about their kids, but the flashback stories sound cool. Can't wait to hear those, hopefully an update soon?