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| Ladyhawke 620 2008-06-04 ch 1,  | abuseEnjoyed it lots. Your writing is improving considerably. Liked your plotline, lots more details this time. The bracelet was a great touch, and I liked the comment about a lifetime of Army and intelligence training. |