 Let's Call Her The Tarryn 2008-06-15 . chapter 1Dear, dear Jo. You know, no matter how late it may be, you're the one person I will always review for. So here it goes, finally [= Of course, I loved it. I mean, what's not to love? And I, personally, am glad it wasn't really angsty. Dasey angst always really stresses me out. I get way too into it, and I end up banging my head against the desk. But this was the perfect mix of everything that I look for in my Dasey stories. Yay! It was great. You should definitely, definitely be proud of this. It's awesome blossom fabulous fantastic (I got that off of that Legally Blonde reality show. Well, I didn't actually watch the show. I was watching The Soup, and it was making fun of the show, since you know, the girl who said that was the one that was talking about her fabulous dance skills, only to go on and smack herself in the head accidentally and repetitively while trying to learn the choreography). Okay, so that had nothing to do with anything, but still, hope it was slightly amusing. Haha. [= Like I've already said a bunch of times, I love it. You are the almight Jo Goddess. We should bow down. [=
(And what's with the Meribelle spoiler at the bottom? I mean, yeah, I'm sure everyone else has finished it, but I suck and am real behind on it. At least I know now if I get to any cliffies in the story where I think Casey's life might end, I KNOW that she'll be fine. lmao. [=
-Tarryn |
 bsloths 2008-05-31 . chapter 1I loved the kids trying to weasel info out of Derek and Casey.
I love, love, loved how you did the flashbacks. Very cool how they were just snapshots like that. And oh, man, Derek being an idiot again, silly boy. I so glad Casey didn't actually cheat!
It was great that Marti was the voice of reason! Go Marti!
"Derek tried to ignore the fact that Casey was crying. Right there. Beside him. Tears… Ugh. Scary!"
lol
And the ending...sigh. So sweet.
Great job!! I can see why you were so excited- it's angsty yet completely adorable! :) |