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Let's Call Her The Tarryn
2008-06-15 . chapter 1
Dear, dear Jo. You know, no matter how late it may be, you're the one person I will always review for. So here it goes, finally [= Of course, I loved it. I mean, what's not to love? And I, personally, am glad it wasn't really angsty. Dasey angst always really stresses me out. I get way too into it, and I end up banging my head against the desk. But this was the perfect mix of everything that I look for in my Dasey stories. Yay! It was great. You should definitely, definitely be proud of this. It's awesome blossom fabulous fantastic (I got that off of that Legally Blonde reality show. Well, I didn't actually watch the show. I was watching The Soup, and it was making fun of the show, since you know, the girl who said that was the one that was talking about her fabulous dance skills, only to go on and smack herself in the head accidentally and repetitively while trying to learn the choreography). Okay, so that had nothing to do with anything, but still, hope it was slightly amusing. Haha. [= Like I've already said a bunch of times, I love it. You are the almight Jo Goddess. We should bow down. [=

(And what's with the Meribelle spoiler at the bottom? I mean, yeah, I'm sure everyone else has finished it, but I suck and am real behind on it. At least I know now if I get to any cliffies in the story where I think Casey's life might end, I KNOW that she'll be fine. lmao. [=

-Tarryn
dramacrazed101
2008-06-01 . chapter 1
post soon!
princetongirl
2008-06-01 . chapter 1
LOVED IT UPDATE SOON
Leaf26
2008-06-01 . chapter 1
Nice work..Love the ending...Keep it up!
jeytonlover
2008-05-31 . chapter 1
Perfect! I love the backstory you created and I loved seeing that the siblings are just as nosey as ever.

And the diner scene and how they got back together!

I loved it all! Wonderful job!
itsi3
2008-05-31 . chapter 1
OH I LOVED IT! Man that was Awsome! You SHOULD be Proud! I'm grinnin likr crazy!
That was so GREAT!
~ Crystal
P.S. I'm gonna guess now,lol...
HELENz
2008-05-31 . chapter 1
CUTE!
carterfinley
2008-05-31 . chapter 1
I LOVED IT! It wasn't quite what I had in mind for the angst factor, but it was still perfect!! I'm so happy! Great job! :)


Is that enough exclamation points to get my point across? haha.
bsloths
2008-05-31 . chapter 1
I loved the kids trying to weasel info out of Derek and Casey.

I love, love, loved how you did the flashbacks. Very cool how they were just snapshots like that. And oh, man, Derek being an idiot again, silly boy. I so glad Casey didn't actually cheat!

It was great that Marti was the voice of reason! Go Marti!

"Derek tried to ignore the fact that Casey was crying. Right there. Beside him. Tears… Ugh. Scary!"
lol

And the ending...sigh. So sweet.

Great job!! I can see why you were so excited- it's angsty yet completely adorable! :)
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