 Jalaila 2008-07-17 . chapter 1wow.
ich bin sprachlos.
(übrigens : ich bins, die zoe ^^)
Das ist wirklich schön. romantisch, erotisch, kribbelnd... und natürlich javajunkie ^^
du hast es echt drauf. nicht jeder kann sex-szenen schreiben, bei vielen wirkt es klischee-bedient und abgehackt. bei dir ist es flüssig und... schön. und die spiegelidee. richtig super :)
alle daumen hoch ;) |
 xcanncx 2008-07-07 . chapter 1hot! |
 penguinopus 2008-06-14 . chapter 1Well - I had to check this out after reading A-Karana's version. Both left me hot and bothered! I was really surprised though - I've seen your comments on almost all the stories I love - I can't believe this is just your second story! I loved the other one your wrote, too. Any others in the works? |
 19Kristyn94 2008-06-03 . chapter 1Very good. I couldn't even tell it was your first time *giggles at the slight dirty in that last comment* You should definitely(sp?) right more! |
 bella carisJJ 2008-06-02 . chapter 1You did it! *yay* I loved it, you should try often ;)
I´m glad the chat was productive...the mirror thing was extremely hot *thud*
Perfect ending also! :D
*hugs* Caro :) |
 Mag68 2008-06-02 . chapter 1Yay! Your first smut was excellent! See now you can write your own squirm worth stories. Thanks so much for starting my day off right ;) |
 sanja 2008-06-01 . chapter 1 loved it, how could i not :D
i told ya you can do it :) now go write another one :D
btw thank you for 'F' word *blush* |
 A-Karana 2008-06-01 . chapter 1Yay, you posted it!
So, great you really wrote it after our chat. I really think we should do this more often!
Really like the story!
Hugs! J. |
 Loridhhp 2008-06-01 . chapter 1Yay! Great job! Nice take on the ugly granny furniture! Lol! |
 4everJavaJunkie 2008-05-31 . chapter 1aw... can't say more right now because it's 4 am but aw and *thud*
It was so good for your first time and yes, you are allowed to say "Dirty!" now XD |