Loved this story. It was difficult to believe that jack would be as unconcerned about this as he appeared in the episode.

This is a really neat story! I love the plot. Great writing

Very good, nice to see Jack's vulnerable side portrayed. It makes sense that he might eventually loose it, the guy has one hell of a history!

Hi!
This is really good, I liked the bit with Rose :) You've written this wonderfully, I hope you'll continue with it.

Oh, I can't tell you how happy to see your name attached to thus! Always loved your stories and thrilled you're here writing Torchwood, too.

This is a wonderful Jack piece and the solution was perfect. Jack's hallucinations were heart breaking!