how can man die better ,than facing down fearfull odds .

Always a sucker for last stand stories this was good cheers?

This story reminds me of 300 -- a small force standing against a mighty army etc. "Madness? THIS...IS...AIUR!"

(You forgot to remove the document title.. :))
There are little errors at the beginning
(All are minor though)

I really like the idea of the whole thing. ^.^
I felt the drama and the heroic act of the templar really got to me.

Good job! :)