Torin looks kinda like Gale for some reason.

Ellis' nickname is Elly? Sounds like a name off of Xenogears.

i loved all 3 stories you wrote. marthsamus is mah . but you need to update! bye:D

NYAAH!

YOU HAVE GOT TO TAKE A BREAK FROM THIS MAN!

YOU WORK SO HARD AND THE STORY'S SO GOOD!

Sorry i didn't review

I was just busy for a while and couldn't read it. Anyways so the next book is continuing from this story or a separate story? Well anyways it seems like Torin really isn't dead right? Cause Liam is like he'll find him, not that he'll somehow bring him back to life. Well good luck and sweet preview to Ramuria!

Can't wait for the third one! ;P

(Can't wait for your original story on DA too... Your characters really catch my attention :3)

Hohum, suppose we never learned about Mars...

I blame the time space continuim.

OMGZ I loved it i was blushing andl aughing i'm so glad your still writing and i love it as excepted form you please continue I love your writing!x3

Have you ever read Metroid Manga? I mean more than firts two chapters that were on called E-manga? You can read them in site called One Manga.

Sorry for bad english.

Sorry about the lack of review for the last chapter. O_O" I haven't been on, see?

Yea. XD

Can't wait for the next book! :'D

*laughs* Other than the fact that Samus was naked when she kissed Marth, that's an 'aw' factor.

Wow*cries* I can't believe it's over no!TT I loved your story so much thnak you for posting it I love when you write and it would be so cool if you wrote another if you decide too I'll definatly review! I look forward to your future work!X3

WAH marth dying and smaus crying made my sad and zelda too!DX I love the chapter you write so good i;m glad your upating!x3

OMG I cried it was such a beautiful and emtional chapter when marht propsed i was like omg!*blushes* I love the stroy great job keep it up!x3

Make a third! XD

I enjoined it and Im usually picky. Congrats :3

Aw. Poor Torin. Get a room Samus and Marth!