nice

Uhm, one thing about the story, I had a hard time with most of the sentences. They seemed to miss some words and that kind of ruined the continuity of the thoughts. On the other hand, I am shocked with the sudden death of TOmoyo. Sad.

(sniff) Syao no hime-chan, even though you're my most fav ExT author and even though you rock,

WHY DID YOU KILL TOMO-CHAN?

but, Syao-chan, the story was lovely...as usual

WHY DID U KILL TOMOYO CHAN!

IS THIS SOME KIND OF KOREANOVELA?

WAH!

BUT STILL WAS GREAT

that was so sad! :(

but i guess that's okay,.,.

great story,.,.

although it was really sad! :(

cute little descendant huh? :)

hhihihhihihi funny! :)

and so totally sweet,.,. :)

that was a nice start! :)

hehhehehe

can't wait to read more,.,. :)

ahh tht was so touching T.T...poor tomoyo... but great fic...we

anou... *looks down* its flooding here... oh! its tears btw...

*sigh* i thought it was happy...

*sniff* it wasn't!

Semper Fidelis it is... and always in the memories...

boo hoo! I have to mop the lake here..! ja! i loved it!

Woah, an ending with a major twist! Haha. Great job on this too. Too bad he had to live with Kaho now...Kidding kidding. Wonderful job!
Mei

So sad... This time Tomoyo died. Sad sad sad.. All I can say.. It's sweet before she died though..

You're cruel i tell you, cruel...haha just kidding! Very nice story! I enjoyed reading it! Keep up the good work!

Mei

tomoyo...died? WAHA! how could you do such a thing? anyway, this is really a good story. and also very meaningful. keep up the good work.

*gasps*oh my god! you killed Tomoyo!why oh why!*cries* oh well! love your fics!update soon!

Chaco

wah! nice story really! i love the e&t pairings! and i also like the this poem. I mean my teacher made us liked it! but i did like it really! your so great! oh.. one more question. are you by any chance a scholastican? e-mail me!ty!