This was a very probable situation for the characters. I found it sad, wistful...the prose had the right mixture of sexuality and shame.

wow


this made me cry

im writing my own Marisa/Asriel fanfic

if u want u could check it out.

:D

that was lovely. a nice peak into their realtionship. I thought it was perfect.

That was beautiful, a bit sad, but still very beautiful!

Wow, this is very well written.

I don't usually go in for the romance side of things, but this one was so well done that I got from start to finish without a single cringe. Great work.

I'm now starting your longer fic, hope to see more of the same kind of writing.

-StarMan.

i actually have an account but logging in would be a pain.
Nice story! Great job on it!