*dances*

Such a suspenseful chapter. I really like how they keep switching their food around. It doesn't reflect on the dialogue too much and it's a great detail to add some life to the characters.


Havoc's such a sweetie. I love him so much. And he still looks, even in a wheelchair and with a real beard.

i have no idea why but “Can I eat her, Lust? Can I eat her? Please say I can eat her.” was the best line in this too me. i guess cause gluttony is such a misunderstood character.and eventhough he's evil he's kind of hard to hate. i think ill make a story about Gluttony. thanks for the inspiration. hehe.

keep up the good work. and please review reall soon

Ed is concerned that he is too small to make a good meal? XD Poor kid. But I believe his actual height is something like 4'11", as they count his antenna and thick boots as part of his height, bringing him up to about 5'5", the cheater. Maybe Raven could smoosh down his antenna and go, "You're not so tall. DX".

I'm glad the basic elements of this chapter are still in place.

nice looking foward to reading more. update soon

I see you're heading to my home con. Hope you have fun! I don't have the dough or the inclination to go this year, so maybe the next.


I see it's not just Elena who has a problem with Havoc's smoking. XD Poor boy. He's just too easy to mess with, isn't he?

I'm glad to see Raven back. I missed her.

Good luck on your rewrite! They're quite liberating, aren't they?

cool please write more soon X3

Ah! Coinky-dink! I just posted chappie 21 of InnerMetal (brand new and after the reign of terror that was the rewrite) too. I missed Fear, strangely enough. She doesn't really lend herself to being missed, but she quite the eccentric.

OH!

Awesomely nice! Really good, I like.

:)

Go Fear! >

lol this is so good! I love this fic...I hope you get to writing more soon!

I'm soo happy you updated! I loved the chapter!!


Did you hear that they're remaking FMA to go with the manga's storyline this time?

Slow updates seem to be the norm in high-school. Sadly.

*sigh*

I'll be getting a tablet soon, so maybe I'll do another Fear sketch. She's an interesting character. Plus, I finally posted a pic on DA of roughly what Spite and Elena look like (it's strange, because I've been drawing them for awhile now).

oh...this fic is so good so far! I am loving it!

Ah. The weight of true immortality was never meant to be carried by anyone save for a one true God, methinks.

I do love how the plot thins and thickens with every chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing where the next goes. Keep writing! :)

-satisfied sigh-

Ah, what a wonderful way to finish my last day of freedom before Monday: fun-shaped eggs, a tall glass of water, and a juicy update of one of my favorite fanfics.~

The plot is thinned and then thickened all over again. The last female homunculi do have a hard time of things, don't they? Whoa. All of the homunculi are male. O_O I just realized that (Does Envy count?).