thank u for this great fanfic.it was just what i wanted after recently watching narnia2 ; and seeing both of them part.

gr8 story !!

of course you should write a sequel! ud be crazii not to. but anyways...this is by far my favourite story! its beautifuly written and captivating.

AMAZING!

Great story...please write a sequel.

AWW...GREAT STORY!!

I loved this story, made me stay up as late as I possibly could to read it, and I finished it in the morning.
Some parts were cliche, while others were very good.
I love how you showed the couple's relationship, but I felt Aslan's answer was a bit too easy given. At first he was determined to send them back, and caused them much grief over it, and then just by Caspian's request, he easily changed his mind? Their worries and fears were then unnecessary.
That's what bothered me, but otherwise, it was very wonderful and I loved reading it. Have you written a sequel yet? Will you? I'd love to read it. :)

Wonderful story! If you write a sequel I will definitely read and review!

this was a great chapter! you had me woorried there for awhile. but it all came out alright.

i think the ay he asked was very sweet. romantic yet respectful of her family at the same time.

I like how he stood up and asked for what he knew she didn't feel she had the right to. even if it was what she wanted.

of course you should write a sequel! you could showw life afterwards. the wedding, and such. i'm sure it will be as good as this one!

and the decication just made my day! It as just so thrilling to see that!

I knew she wouldn't be able to resist Caspian's hotness! Lol! Excellent job, my friend! That last chapter was everything I hoped for and so much more! I do hope a sequel will come someday but as I've said before, whatever you decide to write I will read and support (and love, I already know!). This was amazing! :D

Ah, I love happy endings, and YES she stays, I love how you did that. Susan is my favorite character and I am so glad you made her have a happy ending.

yes , you should it was so nice to read .

sequel plz

Awe so beautiful. I just love this chapter. You had me worried there for second because it was looking like Susan really was going to leave. I am so glad that Aslan gave them a choice. This was so sweet. It sad she'll never see herp arents again but she left them before. But yay Caspian and Susan together forever. I loved your last paragraph I just love, love can conqueor all stories. This was amzing fantastic job!

YES! Sorry, that was just my ever so subtle, sophisticated and smoothly hinting answer to your question at the end... I definitely think you should write a sequel! Or a series of one-shots showing what happened later :)

I really enjoyed the chapter, it was very emotional and very passionate in those emotions! I loved the sadness, the despair, and the hope surviving and fighting till the very end, and winning! It was beautiful! And Caspian's proposal was so very sweet, a wonderful scene in a lovely mood! It was such a lovely story, I'm glad it's done :) And I look forward to some form of sequel! :)

Wonderful Story. From my point of view, a sequel showing more of the History of the Pevensies and Caspian in Narnia would be usefull.

I think as it would be centered on Caspian & Susan, it would be of use to show how the other Siblings cope with the situation and eventually how they will create their families over there.

Eric Alderson,
Belgium.