 Vyersdra 6/13/08 . chapter 1OOC, you've said? Weel I always thought they were all sexual frustrated, and I think it's normal, so I didn't find your one shot OOC, neither Subaru.
Anyways, I enjoyed your story, I thought it hard to understand at the beginning, but after I read through, it was easier.
Sorry for my English, I'm French and my English is not perfect, hope you'll understand!
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 laustic 6/1/08 . chapter 1This was certainly interesting to read. I'm not sure if I could see Subaru doing this, but you never know. I thought this was well written and I think my favorite line has to be this"However Kamui knew better, it was hard to fool someone that had been inside your heart. That venture had left the two with an unbreakable bond. Kamui knew when Subaru was lying and vice versa.
I think that this is very true. |