OK, so I just read this whole fic in one sitting it was so addictive. I wanted more and more and I still want more. I am begging you to continue and post more, please. Chapter 7 was so hot. I love the way you write Pacey and Joey, you have very descriptive writing and I can picture everything perfectly. It is now officially one of my favorites. Please continue!

Oh, this is good. I particularly liked the Pacey/Dawson dialogue in Ch. 9.

It was always disappointing that the show never quite got the Pacey/Dawson relationship back. Dawson really never could reconcile reality with his picture of how things should be. Although to be fair, I do think some authors make Dawson a bit more myopic and obsessive than he actually was on the show. The truth is, however, that he was just more of a dreamer, and living in the real world wasn't for him.

Is there any chance of this being updated any time soon? I really would love to see where you take this!

i would love to see this story updated! it's great

Hola, let me tell you I love love love your story. I like how you describe each characters' emotions and thoughts - specially Pacey and Dawson's - and all the interactions between them.

I don't like too much the idea about Dawson and Jen having a kid together but hey it's your story and I can't wait for the next chapter.

This story is just... I have no words to describe it. It's the best fanfiction I read in a long time, that's for sure!
I like the way you describe the charakters and how they act and everything.
I'm German (btw sorry for the wrong spelling and grammar ;-))and I have to say I like the words you use! Really! It seems you choose the words really... thorough (?) and your writing style is just so easy going. It seems I can't stop (actually I read till now, middle of the night, cause I couldn't stop ;-) And I have to get up in like 4 hours. Ohje... but I had to review you!).
Now I had to stop because there were no more chapters... so please please update!
I promise I'll review again!


P.S. Is Dawson really so... mean and selfish? I had this impression for a long time, hence to reading too many fanfictions. But I watched the show on DVD again and I could understand his reactions sometimes somehow.
Now, the Dawson in your story is another story :-D

I love this it's so good!

I love this story! I miss the show so much now lol!

great writeing style. very good story but a ** dawson, he tried to stay friends with jory, and pecy just stop talking to him, he was a good guy that made some mistake but i dont belive he was this bad.

this seem more like a bash dawson fic then anythink else.

he does have a right to be ** he keep his daughter from him for 6 years.

good idea when pacy throw dawson over borad he hit his head and almost drowns, taken to a hospital and is an como be nice to see that they do care about him

This is really good, and not just the story but the writing. Just wondering when you plan on posting the rest... i really want to know what happens.

Please please update soon! It's killing me! It's really a remarkable story!

I am really liking this story. I like the fact that you are keeping close to the characters' actual personalities. I also enjoy the fact that Joey is portrayed as a strong female in this story instead of someone needing rescuing like she is made to be in so many other fan fics.

Dawson being Amy's father adds another element of surprise...in a good way. I'm looking forward to a another update soon.

I have to say, I absolutely LOVE this story. Not only is the plot interesting and appealing, but the way you write is fantastic. When in Dawson's POV, you manage to capture his kind of pretentious speech without the meaning being lost. And I absolutely love how you portray the Joey/Pacey relationship, and surprisingly, because of the way you write, I really like seeing it through Dawson's eyes. Usually I take the Anti-Dawson Express (I just find his character annoying and self absorbed), but in your story, even though he's still like that, I find that instead of rolling my eyes at his stupidity, I'm smiling at the way that everyone's changed around him, and now he has to change too. You have to understand, I've been reading on this site for the past six years, and though I enjoy many stories, I rarely review (as in two, maybe three times in the past six years). Not only are you a phenomenal writer from a purely structural stance, but you really paint a picture with the words and give the characters life. I await the next chapter anxiously (please post it soon!), and am on my way to reading your other stories. Lets just say, you definately have a faithful reader in me (and no doubt many more than just me), so please give me more to read!

i love this story!
im dying for the next chapter...
i love the way youve shaped the charaters they are themselves with a little twist.

Without exagerrating, it is easy to say that this is one of the best DC fanfics ever.

I am an unabashed Pacey and Joey fan. Their's is a a true storybook romance and you write it so well. Truth be told, I have never read a DC story that ever captured their relationship so perfectly.

Your excoriation of Dawson is both highly amusing and satisfying. Please keep it up. He deserves it.

Happiness is not a continuous state of mind. It is just a matter of fleeting moments that occur ever so unexpectedly. Reading this story makes me happy, so for that I say thank you!