so well-written !! bravo !

Omigosh! This is BEAUTIFUL! I love your writing style, and the emotions you weave through your writing, Kanda's thought processes, the dialogue and aww... it's just a breath of fresh air, compared to all the fluff-heavy fanfics out there. XD Nothing was overdone here! It makes me so HAPPY~~ :) *swoon* Thank you for writing and posting such a masterpiece!

AWW THE SWEETNESS.

Nicely characterised- very introspective, and the tower was an interesting concept in itself. Keep writing! :D

~nush-nush.

lovely story, and a great job on keeping them in charcter!

GAH! D:<

I read this story a long time ago, but I lost it when my USB went corrupt. :C

Do you have any idea how long I spent looking for it? ; __;
I didn't find it until I took a break looking for it. What's up with that? D: HUNH?!

I swear, it's like your story is running away from me. :C
(I don't blame it. XDD )

Was it worth it?

Totally. C:

This is really really lovely, great story idea, so well written and the characterisation is just spot on. I love it, one of the best one shots I've read.

wahh!! Super cute!!

I like it when a story seems like it can actually happen in the series, and I can definitely see this happening in the series. I think that Kanda was so in character here, Allen too. I really really liked it.

Could this be considered fluff?

AllenKanda all the way!

Heh. You're a good author is the reason why you can identify with him so much. -grins-
Hmm.
Like the theme of this.
It's very nice.
Doesn't seem like it would fit Kanda, but, it makes perfect sense at the same time.
Keep up the good work, my friend.

And you write an excellent Kanda. :D

I really liked this. You did a great job of keeping them in character. Kanda is properly disgruntled and both of them are just as stubborn as can be. I loved the atmosphere. They both feel older and tired and war-weary.

As somebody who has lost several hours of sleep studying Kanda's character, traits, and actions, this was a REALLY good depiction of him. I love how you bring out his constant need for support, which is something people often don't see in him. The complexity of his thoughts is very beleivable. Definitely one for the favorites. ^^ Good job!

~Exor. A. Kanda

Well this fic was just so cute *squeal* I now you've probably heard that in all the other reviews but I had to say it. I love the whole idea of Kanda actually missing his 'home' even if he doesn't show it so much [until they moved headquarters of course]. The ending was adorable and I like how you stated how Allen is representative of the rest of those who worry about Kanda's wellbeing (since he would be the only one willing to go that far [risking his life] to pummel it into Kanda's stubborn/thick skull). I really enjoyed reading this. Great writing. Loved it!

Great story! It's cool that you write a lot about Kanda, since he doesn't show a whole lot of emotion. Those emotions being Moody and pissed off, and it's fun to see what other people think is going on in his head. Love how you depict him, and this story is just plain cute! Keep up the good work!

DMK