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Z.N. Singer
2009-10-22 . chapter 1
Lovely. I should have checked out your stories more thoroughly after reading 'Iris.' Not too many authors up here I really consider 'authors', if you know what I mean. Even less whose writing can really awe me. Please check your inbox, I've sent you something I'd like you to read.
cara
2009-09-28 . chapter 1
unforgettable.
Jaque Weasley
2009-06-01 . chapter 1
The end was really cute >.<
juzblue
2009-05-20 . chapter 1
That was sweet!! :D
ImCutePoison
2009-04-01 . chapter 1
Ah, the end was so cute.. :]
unkeptsecret
2009-03-31 . chapter 1
Nice! I was looking for a real, sweet little Neji/Hinata fic, and am glad I stumbled across this one!
shadow of the lost
2008-11-27 . chapter 1
Amazing!
Rinhail
2008-08-18 . chapter 1
Beautiful!

Sorry for the lack of review. Lazy teenager!
ch3rryphr34k
2008-07-23 . chapter 1
it was amazing and very well written. subtle steps, everything flows well. i rarely read this shipping and its one of my favorites so this fic is brilliant.
WaterMonkey
2008-07-20 . chapter 1
This is really good. i like how you wrote in present tense.
Shivohnsongbreeze
2008-07-13 . chapter 1
I liked it! Loved the characterization of Hinata and Neji...and the mood created was beautiful...and great job pacing the story. Though I think Neji's relationship w/Hinata improved after the Chuunin exam when her father talked to Neji, so I'm not sure how much he hated her after that.
MlleD
2008-06-10 . chapter 1
incredible!
kaiyrah
2008-06-06 . chapter 1
I'm really happy that I found this. Upon reading the title I immediately thought it would be some horrid songfic to Rihanna, but I'm glad I was proven wrong. I really like the way this was written, the pacing and characterization are excellent. I really liked the analogy of the rain to their relationship; with the summer rain thick and suffocating and the fall rain light and unrestrained. You write such beautiful NejiHina. :)
Mystery Me 222
2008-06-06 . chapter 1
That was the shit, i love the way you wrote it.
Inner Poise is great
2008-06-05 . chapter 1
aside from the fact that i have a huge soft spot for all things written in the present tense, i really like how you write. the story flows nicely. good job, please keep up the good work!
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