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| XxXbUnNy.LawlietXxX 2008-07-28 ch 3,  | abuseOMG. I LOVE YOUR STORY! AWESOME! XD PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
| PyschoB 2008-06-07 ch 3, | abuseOH! Plz update...I luvs it and I simply must have more! You are going on my alerts and when I check my e-mail 2 weeks from now I better have a chapter...please? Yagami-san is being a jerk to Raito...albeit I would be wierded out by a close family member being in love with someone of the same gender, I wouldn't suppress them, I would support them...poor Raito. |
| Shadow-L-Chan 2008-06-06 ch 3, | abuseNice. A jealous L is a cranky L. Great story so far! I hope you'll update soon! |
| SekushiAi 2008-06-06 ch 3, | abuseYay! This chapter was good! I like that you didn't make them have sex straight away. Even if little Raito is impatient XD Can't wait for the next update! |
| fouloldron 2008-06-06 ch 3, | abuseWhat was the evidence? Does this mean that Kira is still killing? It's rather ooc for the ICPO to take L off the case just because he got caught making out with another man of legal age. Though it is bad that he's a suspect...but L could always lie that he was increasingly aware of Light's innocence but that he was unsure of how to broach the subject with his lover. Anyway interesting chapter. I think Yagami-san will pick Raito up from school on the basis that he was happy to be going. Thanks for the update, Ronnie. :D |
| 191026 2008-06-06 ch 3, | abuseWell, I really like this ficcie! Its so cute that L is jealous . . . . . .well i suppose I would be too if I saw my man kissing a female friend . . . . .even if he didnt want to! Definately keep this fic up Gonna add it to my favs! 191026 |
| Party in the Afterlife 2008-06-06 ch 3, | abuseYou move fast but that's okay. Can't wait to see more! |
| alx-nichole 2008-06-05 ch 2, | abuseooh. X3 this is getting good. I want more! XD |
| romulus-girl 2008-06-03 ch 2, | abuseCome on. This is good, but L is SO the uke in the deal. He's just... more uke like than Ratio. Lol, update soon. |
| Witchy Willow 2008-06-03 ch 2, anon. | abuseAhh! What a place to stop! Too cruel. *shakes head* Too cruel. Seriously, great fic. I love the way you describe events. And you seem to be quick to update too. That and this is an excellent pairing (I know that there are quite a few fics with this pairing but I really do like it). So please, please update. |
| Prince Raiden Ruler of thun... 2008-06-03 ch 2, | abuseplease review ^^ i like this ^^ butwhen they do had sex L must be pregnant then ^^ haha lol and they get twins then (2 girls) ill help you through the story-idea's (if you want) -x-x-x- PR.Rot |
| A 2008-06-03 ch 2, anon. | abuseKawaii!^_^ |
| Party in the Afterlife 2008-06-03 ch 2, | abuseUm...okay. That was sweet and please, please, please don't stop here! Pretty please? |
| Yaoifangirl 2008-06-03 ch 2, anon. | abuse*reads beginning of chapter 2* Aww your story doesn't suck, I know I send her a review saying that so then she continues the sto- *reads the ending* XD I'm mopping up a nosebleed on my side of the computer! |
| C Elise 2008-06-03 ch 2, | abusegreat story! the next please |