Good story so far. Quite an original plot. Everyone is extremely out of character (I.E. "Whatch me, I am" Slade said.) Slade would never say that. He would say something more along the lines of a mysterious quote, not some childish saying that sounds like he's running away with a stolen candy.

The way you write is a little bit bumpy. As in, it doesn't flow together well. Try to keep the run-on scentences to a minimum, and keep the thoughts complete and to the point.

I'm a bit busy, so I can't read the rest, but keep up the good work!

-Alien