Wow, this was quite good. "Get Jake Foley" is my favorite episode of the series. YOu did a good job expressing his feelings.

Love the story! Very nicely written. The way you got into Jake's head was really good. I particularly liked the ending.

Now, if the show could have just continued...

Hello,

I'll start off by saying I'm really amazed. Loved the language use, the descriptions, the realistic thoughts of the main character, everything.

I've never actually read a story in this fandom, but this one shot just convinced me to read more. (It's only a tiny fandom with only three pages, but still.)

I have always loved the little plot holes inbetween you can think about for yourself, but honestly, I don't think I could have done a better job than you.

Lady Midday

Excellent story! It's great to find those little bits of lost story.