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Oceaniad
2009-11-25 . chapter 1
I loved it, so much! Lately I've been reading loads and loads of Fletset fanfiction... I have to say this one's on par on my favorites list with one other!
And that line, "I think you liked watching me..." I almost fainted!
Brilliant. Genius. I love you.
Liaque
2009-08-23 . chapter 1
Hey, that's... Cute!
DemonVamp9019
2009-08-01 . chapter 1
I loved it!
Hoeru.GetsugaPantera-obsessin
2009-07-24 . chapter 1
That was really interesting. I've never heard of someone reacting to porn like that. But, all the same, the story was really cute
StAnXkYlE
2008-12-15 . chapter 1
cute :) why was stan crying?? stan!! :(
BratChild3
2008-10-16 . chapter 1
lol =) K, I apologize for this review, but this one was too funny not to tell you what a literary genuis you are.
Evie Antorcha
2008-08-17 . chapter 1
Omg! I absolutly loved it, I like how you made Stan to be a little late in his true realizations and Kyle, oh my, I can totally picture Kyle being a total freak. lol great job.
thelifeofabinder
2008-07-25 . chapter 1
I loved it!! The emotions were great and I thought the writing was awesome. Very real. :D

Great job! X3
lx-Kisa-xl
2008-07-25 . chapter 1
... -Snort-
Noice.
Nikkapillar
2008-07-20 . chapter 1
...wow, what a way to find out that your friend is a gay porn actor... download all his porn! Stan was funny in this fic. x3

lol The ending was REALLY funny! xDD

I lmaoed~
Loca Bambina
2008-07-14 . chapter 1
Oh wow, that was really... different. In a very good way. :)

I'll get the technical stuff out of the way - definitely some awkward phrasing and a couple misused words, but nothing too bad. Really, it amazes me in all your work how much of a command you have over the English language!

I love how the sixth grade play traumatized Kyle so much that he would act in a porno; it's so un-Kyle, so OOC, that it worked. Stan is incredibly... Stan-like in his fascinated discomfort, and as Foodstamp said, the whole piece had this incredibly awkward air about it, which is a very difficult and impressing thing to pull off. Good job. :)
Flawless Beauti
2008-06-25 . chapter 1
I have no words. That was so funny. I love Stan. He's so oblivious.
XxSexiItxX
2008-06-16 . chapter 1
hohohohohohoho! loved it!
Aerliin Skylarre
2008-06-14 . chapter 1
You officially win teh internets :]

pornstar!kyle was basically the awesomest thing ever, great job!
hyde_angel_1989@hotmail.com
2008-06-11 . chapter 1
God! it´s awsome XD i like when Kyle said to Stan than he thinki he likes to watck Kyle making out. Nice fic!!
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