Huh... that's much better then my seven put together...

JL

Haha brilliant

You've done a capital job here, mate! Absolutely loved it.

That really was a well written little one-shot. Really funny.

You might want to edit a bit on your lay-out. It is a great chunk of text to read. Maybe you should try spacing it.

Leridan

oh my god, that was hilarious!

Funny! It might be kind of interesting if you then did a story from Charlie's point of view... just something to think about, or if Charlie turned out to be Charlie Weasley.