Reviews for Author Fighters: Rebellion

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The Evil Sound Ninja 2008-07-23 ch 5,	abuseSometimes I wonder what it would be like to give into the darkness, to completely succumb myself in the tempting power to feel dirty, to feel violated , to feel corrupted to the very core. That moment with the ninja I felt power beyond my dreams, it was like the evil. but still its essence was so much like my own and I liked it no scratch that I loved it, the feeling of absolute control. I wonder if that is how Drake feels like with his dark-side powers and that scares me will I to become a monster who care’s only about himself a person who is willing to sell his soul for his own self satisfaction. Evil told me that it was okay, it was necessary to let out the darkness once in a while; if something like that is cooped up in the body for to long it will eventually want out. He told me that he had gone through a similar transformation and it was one of the most powerful weapons at my disposal. This transformation is known as the anti-form, the name is such because it represents everything a person doesn’t wasn’t to be.
Evil Riggs 2008-07-21 ch 5,	abuseInteresting stuff, really. Good exploration of a character, even if his emotional vulnerability is somewhat out of left field. Still, it speaks volumes that you're trying to get in some more introspective moments before rippin' shit up. I approve.
The Oracle Dragon 2008-07-21 ch 5,	abuseso short! Anyway, good story, i hope to see myself soon. Syn could ask for my council. ^_^ Can't wait to read the next chapter! :D
Iron-Mantis 2008-07-16 ch 5,	abusepretty good. tlike how you added a deepness to your bad guy thoughts.
DarkMagicianmon 2008-07-16 ch 5,	abuseVery interesting though Drake may seem like he treats his minions like slaves he does care for them, so long as they don't try anything foolish
Ranger24 2008-07-16 ch 5,	abuseYeah shade's victory will be explained in full by the end of the next fic vie a series of flash backs by Kanton.
The Evil Sound Ninja 2008-07-08 ch 4,	abuseGood and Evil are merely perspective, but darkness is friend to neither
Ranger24 2008-07-07 ch 4,	abuseKanton won't go quietly. three words. FLAMING DARK SPARTAN! LOL! Also I have a new fic in the kingdom hearts section!
Ranger24 2008-07-07 ch 3,	abuseFlood! SHIT!
Evil Riggs 2008-07-06 ch 4,	abuseNot bad, not bad. The scene centered around Syn is easily the strongest of the chapter, delving deeper and giving more detail than the others. I could have definitely lingered on the space battle, perhaps using a specific character involved in it to root the point of view. It's an interesting scene, but it needs more time to really resonate for me. Keep it up!
airnaruto45 2008-07-06 ch 4,	abuseokay dave wh is it I'm not in the story yet?
The Oracle Dragon 2008-07-06 ch 4,	abuseWho! Great! Can't wait to read the next chapter, next month. :D
DarkMagicianmon 2008-07-06 ch 4,	abuseJeez that Father Maxwell must not like us at all
Iron-Mantis 2008-07-05 ch 4,	abuseSyn ready to kill Drake, The Major going on a war spree and us author fighters about to get in a bloodyy battle with Iscariot when we fallen for there obvious trap, awesome!
Evil Riggs 2008-06-17 ch 3,	abuseI apologize if my reviews make it seem like I'm filled with grinding hatred for this story. I'm not. Like I said in my first review, it's a refreshingly different take on the whole Author Fighters mythos. It feels a little like one of the extremely fun, "Let's have some superheroes fight a known sci-fi horror!" comic book, like Batman vs. Aliens. (This reminds me: I need to go looking for Batman and Superman vs. Predator vs. Aliens. Apparently it has Darkseid in it!) However, the issues I bring up do stand. They sometimes detract from the overall enjoyment of the story, and sometimes are simply little blips that make things less than perfect. I know this isn't a completely serious piece (lol Communist werewolves), but even tongue-in-cheek stories need polishing and repair to make them work at their best. The issues here are largely the same as the last chapter: A little too short, a little to frantic. You could probably remove the scene with the Hellknight unless you intend to tie it into the larger plot - as of now, it's way too abrupt and random to stand alone. Other than that, the content's fine. I smiled more than once, to be sure.

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