that was a good option insted of what really happened! XD LOLs

Having followed Bonne Foi for some time now, I know what a superb writer you are. Still, this was a pleasant surprise because it follows canon and thus requires you to keep Edward and Bella in character, which you do so unbelievably well. Truthfully, this is probably the best first time between them I have ever read, and I've seen quite a few (being a complete perv, of course ;) Bella is wonderful, but I'm especially impressed with your Edward - every word he spoke, every move he made, it was all PERFECT and completely in character.

Thank you so much for an awesome read and best of luck with the next chapter of Bonne Foi - I can't wait! :)

*Blushing and gasping* OMG this was GREAT! How talented you are girl!

I have always thought to myself that if that had been ME in that meadow, things would have happened SO differently, so I can really appreciate this ending to the original chapter;)

This rocks :D Great job.

Such a sweet version- a perfect interpretation...

This has to be the best lemon/erotic fiction I've ever read.

Uh, I think I broke my lap top screen squeezing it while I read this...my heart beat fast-I couldn't breathe-need I say more...holy effin smokes...I'm gonna go take a cold shower now ;-)

perfect

an absolutely perfect story

omg u need to update this story it has been way too long to keep us in the dark about edward and bella future.

I love it! Exactly how I would have pictured Eclipse ending, if there hadn't been more to come. Great story.

Beautifully written! I don't think SM could have done it better had she actually written out the lovemaking scenes :)

loved itt your so good wriing twilight stories i have read all of them up to here and i plan on reading themm all

That was GOOD!

Beautiful story. You've captured Edward so perfectly - I can completely believe that if SM had written this part, Bella and Edward would have spoken exactly this way (especially Edward).