That was very very good

This is one of the most beautiful stories (of this nature and subject) that I think I have ever read on fan fic. Beautiful job

“You are far too coherent – I must not be doing this right.”

Fantastic.

beautifull absolutley beautiful

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.

Some lemons are crude, but yours was crafed perfectly with just the right mix of lemon and fluff. The perfect lemonade.

Aw, I loved this story! Great job with it! :-)

Awesomeness! I thought it was totally cool.

You are a very, VERY talented writer : ) I thoroughly enjoyed this story! This intimate moment between Bella and Edward is definitely what should have happened in the last chapter haha! I hope you keep writing more naughty stories like these! Thanks for sharing ; )

so good, loved it, very nice!

once again you astound me! you are indeed briliant. to put to the page what my poor wanting wandering mind seeked so impatiently. for that i must thank you! i look forward to finding more good things from you.. and reading this over again. lol!

Aww. (:

I loved the ending, and everything else. XD