...you still writing this?

PRETTY PRETTY PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE CONTINUE THIS! I really liked the Cross and Ikari meeting part thingy.

this is a very cute story :]

Please update this :D

Awws so cute! I want his jacket! Please update soon!

awe that was so adorable!*squeal/giggle*im such a fangirl and its not to predictable because i didnt expect general cross to show up at all.

i absolutely loved it it was so cute!

please UPDATE!HEHEHE.

and keep on writing!:)

UPDATE :]

good story i lobe debito i wish there were more storys for him and oc

I loved you Story, it's awesome! \o/

Oh, pleease, update soon! I can't wait to read more! :D

This is an awesome story and I love where it's going, only thing is that you put spaces after periods and commas. To me, it makes a story hard to read when people do that. D:

Right:

Apples are red. And, my friend said, they taste good, to.

Wrong:

Apples are ,my friend said,they taste good,to.

Update soon please!

thats so sweet!

aww...i love this story, update soon.

... you realize that this entire chapter was in bold, right?

yoyr writing is soo good! but why is dero being so mean?

8D cross is so sexy LOLZ! great chapter i love it i thing your writing improved since the first chapter and i hope you update soon :D

Aww i loved this chapter there are almost no typos and i love debitto! thnx for update!

TOO CUTE! XD Yet still with a sharp tongue!

I love those two, they're my favourite Noahs. Will Jasdero get jealous when he sees them? Get in with them? Somehow wake them?

I liked how Jasdero answered when Debito passed out, it was really in character and something he would probably do in the anime as well. Well, that or running around in a frenzy shooting at things.