OH! That was cool and sweet~~! I really liked it and it is definitly has the whole 'what was Allen doing while he was 'dead'?' question answered! Good job~!

I also really like the songs lyrics. It's so addicting I wish it was a realy song~! It sounds like a haunting melody that Allen would sing to himself as he ran happily down a rode all by himself (or maybe with Tyki XP). It's really cool and gives another look at out favorite exorsist that isn't to dark or to... happy... and helps desplay many emotions and twisted thoughts that Allen must have had. It's very, very cool

Really enjoyed it~!

That was beautiful =)
Really deep thoughts and really original.
:0 I never new how to spell rhetorical before! ;P

oh me love me love! wonderful story!

*stares in awe* those lyrics.. I think I fell in love.. They're so sad and so Allen and I'm crying.. :')
The story in itself was wonderful too.. :) I liked Tyki really much in this one and I just hope he gets his heart together again someday.. :)

I think Allen is a Sweet Lord.
And when I read your fic "I’ll have the God’s lap as my personal seat."
I think that we think the same ^^

*claps stunnedly* Amazing... that's all i got...

about the song... well *coughcough* I sang it ^^; It's really good! (then again, with my crappy voice, it's sound even better with someone else singing ^^; ) I completely forgot about the D on the skull... and Allen forgot about it when he woke up D8

About the song in the manga... who said lullaby's couldnt be fast and have a changing melody? ^^

BRILLIENT! (sorry, outburst ^^; )
Bye!

It was was sweet =)
I hope Allen will remember this and help Tykki to make his heart whole.

that was so good! i thought you got the song from a site because it was so beautifully written, it was like a professional wrote them!!

your lyrics are excellent! I think this was a good shot :)

Very good! And it fits well into everything else that has happened, and your song was amazing!
Nothing bad to comment, and nothing I can see that you need to improve on.
Beautiful.