I LOVE this story! It's soo sweet!

That's so cute! I loved it!

Signed,
Your faithful Review...the good doctor

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i love this story! It would be wonderful if u wrote a sequel!

This time i relized it was the epolauge so i want another one. onegaii?(is that spelled right?
Dunkin: I like it alot!

Cringle: Ktten is a baka but, i luv your story!

Ktten: Am not! You aren't going to flame anyone for a week!

Cringle: Not fair.

Zoey: I do really like your fic! If you ever need a penguin to attak someone who flames your story ask because i love them. Except I hate Cammy.

Ktten: THey wanted to say something keep it up on your other fics b/c we all loe em
Ktten her evil penguins of doom

I love this story its soooo sweet T/P rule! you should make a sequal like have it start out with Pan and Trunks after getting married and on there honeymoon maybe even throw in a baby! that would put the icing on the cake

This is a great story. Enjoyed it alot.

honto sugoi! that was an awesome ficcy! I just totally loved it sooo much!

oh my goddess, that is such an awesome fic! _ as soon as we can fix our favorites this is definately going on. i'd love to write more, but i have to go to work in 2 minutes, so i'll sign in and write more when i get home. mj

This was a very beautiful story. I hope you do a sequel about Pan and Trunks' life as a married couple.

you are so creative. i love your story. i hope you wrote some more. email me back

I READ YOUR FIRST CHAPTER AND I"M GROSSED OUT ALL READY! PAN IS 12? THAT WOULD MAKE TRUNKS 24! THAT'S GROSS! SICKO!

ok! that was a great story! but were's the rest? i need to read the date!
ps...

Congradulations on being married!

NEXT CHAPTER. PLEASE!

This is really good! i liked how you based it on Pan's whole life. Are you gonna continue to write more chapters? I hope you do!

MORE MORE!