Cool! :)

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wait i dont get it like at all i get that the story is from roses pov and that it would be if at the end of new moon didnt happen the way it did but what happened please tell me

hey, it was magnificent and I'm sure many would like to see it turn into a full blown story-please. It would be grreat!

If you have any further inspiration for this, I would really love to see it continue. It throws a different look into the Twilight universe.

The beauty of being a latecomer in the Twilight universe is having to joyfully play catch up with fanfics, and then being ecstatic at finding one worth reading. This is definitely one of those. It's distinctly unique, the character dimensions you created around Rosalie fascinating.

I just love the way you take certain key scenarios and then twist it up into your own brand of storytelling all the while still keeping true to the characters. Fantastic! I can only hope to find more of your work in the future.

This is perfection as a one-shot, but I'd love to see this turned from a vignette into a full-blown story--even if it's a rather short story. It's really unique, and too, too good not take further.

If you don't, you're robbing us I tell ya, robbing us!

Wow wow wow! I really liked it! I really like that you put it in Rose's point of view...i really wish you would continue it though. It could turn out to be a really good story! But hey...it's great how it is! I loved it!

love ya,
ebony

o interesting! good one shot. i ike it.

Suspenseful! This seems like it's really gonna turn out good!

Oh wow! I love it! I know it's supposed to be a one-shot, but I seriously wanna see more! Maybe a one-shot follow-up showing them changing Bella and then one after that showing Edward's reaction to Bella being changed? Please, please, please?

~ Kyra

Greta story :)

aww! that was kind of sweet [weirdly enough]. how many years later was it? has bella aged a lot?

i like it but i dont rele get it...

That was so sad but probaly true.

Your sad fan,
Eliana

Oh wow.

Absolutely heartbreaking and awe-inspiring.

Wonderfully written piece.