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| La Lolita 2008-08-02 ch 1, | abuseBruce stared at the lovely waffle, lost. Waffles and coffee. Holy communion. He wasn’t worthy. greatest line ever |
| oksofia 2008-07-27 ch 1, | abuseThis story has a great hook, awesome characterization, and a writing style that's in focus and sophisticated. Are you sure you're not actually Bruce Wayne? |
| Kaysin-12 2008-07-15 ch 1, | abuseSweet as Maple sryup, and coming from a New England girl that's saying something. Bruce can be such a little boy sometimes. ^_^ |
| i 2008-07-10 ch 1, anon. | abusethanx for that, i needed the laughter. nice piece of fluff! |
| kaibasgirlx 2008-06-29 ch 1, | abuseOmg, this was AMAZING! One of the BEST Clark/Bruce friendship stories I ever read! I absolutely loved it! You really got them IC, especially Batman, who's often hard to pinpoint, but wow, wow, wow, wow, I LOVED this! "“This is the third time,” Bruce growled, his voice like rust on the gates of hell, “that you have woken me up.” His hands clenched, perhaps unconsciously, into fists at his sides. “Explain.”" That line gave me so much amusement like you have no idea! I literally burst out laughing after reading it! Omg, you write the Bruce/Clark relationship so well, and this was such a masterpiece, I know I said it before, but I absolutely loved it!! Hope you write more stuff like this! ~Téa |
| JerichoGirl 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abuseThat was really good. Superman doesn't need to eat? Anyway I enjoyed how Bruce got jealous of Clark's and Alfred's relationship. |
| XClaire BearX 2008-06-03 ch 1, | abuseahahaha batmans just like: mwr. at the end LOL! LMFAO superman has been going to his house evry day!?? shiit LOL XD XD XD it was a great storyy! :D :D :D i liketh it a lot! :D :) hehehe clark is such a nerd (how his glasses always fall off his nose LMAO). ZOMG- when batman was all: UR MY BUTLER! I was like: O__O dam, possessive much? LOL- aw i luvz it ! :) :)great job! :) :) |
| Talentless Freak 2008-06-03 ch 1, | abuseNice. It was very well-written. A good read. Thanks. |
| BatTitan 2008-06-03 ch 1, | abuseDang it! (steals Bruce's waffles and runs as he chases me) Now you made me hungry, too! And I'm in the middle of class right now, so I have about...(checks clock)...three hours till lunch. Yay for waiting. I actually had to read the middle part of the story a few times to get what was going on with Bruce's emotions (what can you expect? I'm 14!), but once I got it, I thought it was very sweet. I'll be looking forward to more fics like this one! |
| KCS 2008-06-02 ch 1, | abuseGah! Sweeter story than those very appealing waffles! Now I'm hungry... Seriously, I hope you continue to do these, they're simply adorable and I absolutely love them - and there's a massive dearth of non-slash Clark/Bruce. Please do more soon! :D |
| wild wolf free17 2008-06-01 ch 1, | abuse*GLEE* |