thats a nice story
i like it

Very nice and interesting. I like how you didn't make them be in either Gryffindor or Slytherin. And your characters are believable. You've got good structure and from what I can see, good grammar as well. I think you may have a typo here:

"Draco had already assumed he was going to do that."

Meant to be she? Brilliant job!

aw, that's probably why Scarlett freaked out as much as she did towards Draco at the latest lake incident;)
Are you updating soon on the "real" story? I need it;)
Ditte Mai