 DaynaWayna 2009-03-12 . chapter 3ROFLMBO!! Krissy and Bogg were straight outta Raiders of the Lost Ark! ::laughs herself silly:: That was priceless, Dennis. Priceless! And then he gets Helga.. Oy! LOL Now THAT would be scary. Yeesh! She no can clean my wounz... no, danke. LOL Ze ankel, she is FINE! :D So, I guess he NEVER gets the pretty girl. ::sigh:: And poor Jeff, getting all worked up with worry about Bogg… That doctor took too long go talk to Jeff. Made me wanna hug him, poor thing.Mike and Steve are a comedy crack up. What a couple of cute, well-meaning dorks. LOL
And unless I missed it, I have no idea what YEAR they’re in right now. From the sound of things, they’re in the later 1960’s… 25 cent cokes? But I guess it doesn’t matter anymore since now they’ve left. LOL I’m looking forward to the rest of this! Yay fun! |
 DaynaWayna 2009-03-12 . chapter 2Not a very auspicious start to a ski trip, me thinks. You freaked me out there for a moment, as I had horrifying visions of Sonny Bono hitting the tree. The banter Jeff and Bogg have just slays me, although I must say that if Bogg was moving that fast, Jeff never would have had the time to say all that before getting run over. :p ::giggles::
And of course… Snow bunnies. ::shakes her head:: Phineas, Phineas… my dear sweet boy. ::sigh:: Does he EVER ‘get the girl’? LOL It was very nice of Mike and Steve to stop and help them. Yay for the Good Samaritans!
This sounds very much like when my hubby tried to teach ME how to ski way back when… he actually skied BACKWARDS while I went forwards! I was amazed. But thankfully, neither of us crashed. LOL So now, let's see what's wrong with Phineas! :O |
 pixiegold 2008-08-13 . chapter 10Hi. I really liked all of your stories. I pretty much read them at the same time so I'm givin you the review for all of them here. I liked them all! Keep up the good work. I don't think you should worry if another auther uses a similar idea from history as you, after all, we are all familiear with the more famous events of history, so it is logical that some stories will have the same events as their back drops as long as the problems are not the same. I really like the relatonship between Jeff and Boag, it's so sweet. I hope you kepp writing. |
 Mrs.Phineas Bogg 2008-06-02 . chapter 10ROFLOL...that's right, torment him with Henry the 8th! Alright, now you're making me hungry again, good thing I just had a piece of steak! LOL. I forgot to say that I loved that hidden door behind the art thing myself! Ew...a swim in the Thames...not so pleasant after hearing about all those cement shoes down there! Gahh! HAHAH...Bogg wants to go back to the snow bunnies, I dub..'Krissy and Missy', ROFLOL...Great ending to a charming story, thanks for sharing! |
 Mrs.Phineas Bogg 2008-06-02 . chapter 9Hey, back at the Champ Elysees, like in POTO, lol. And as usual you have me right there with them! OH that must have been a HARD fall! Poor Bogg! roflol..the kiss of death! Look at this crowd, roflol...they guy was knocked out! He got up! DOH!OMG! The old lady almost flew up in the air like the Little Rascals! Too funny! Boy is she P'Oed!! ROFLMBO...HAHAHA...He got beat with a bag! TOO FUNNY! Aw..for once Jeff is not joking, he was seriously worried! Have no fear, Phinny's here! See, I'm learning things I never knew about the Curies, how sad for Pierre! :( I'm laughing at Bogg trying to duck Harold, though I know it's because he wants to make an exit, roflol.
“You’re not sugar, you know. You won’t melt!”
ROFLOL..one of the greatest sci fi stories eva! About the sugar people, roflol!
Bogg, so not a Dumb old pirate! This is gonna be sad, because they will have to let Pierre go down with the carriage and save Marie..OMG!! I got goosebumps! Jeffrey is gonna totally BLAME himself!! OMG! ACK! How sad!! Well...I might for a little while, but you know it is a sad part of history and had to happen...
Good chapter! |
 Mrs.Phineas Bogg 2008-06-02 . chapter 8ROFLMBO...Gangsta!Bogg..very goot Dennis! ROFLOL..Jeffy got a head slap! LOL. All these thugs, I would be shakin' in my boots! Good for Bogg's MacGyver Skills, reminds me of Mac with the blindfold in my other story, LOL. Geesh how long is this walk, miles and eternity! LOL...I'd want a rest! LOL..'Whoa Daire!' LOL..I am so acting this out right now..Hey, did they have dial combinations back in early nineteen hundreds? Yay for Bogg's sleight of hand..a very close encounter indeed! |
 spencerthekat 2008-06-02 . chapter 10Poor Jeffy is always the butt of the jokes at times...LOL! It was funny to read the recap of their adventure. Lord Francis seemed so intrigued by it all!
This was a great Story Dennis! GREAT JOB! :) I really enjoyed it! |
 spencerthekat 2008-06-02 . chapter 9I bet it was a shock to all those people in Paris seeing someone land on the ground right in front of their eyes. "Merci. Je vais bien. Je ne suis pas mort! Merci pour votre aide." - typical Bogg response...ROFLOL.
“Vous homme stupide, que vous avez meurtri mes legumes.” ~ but this line - He can bump into me anytime he wants...ROFLMBOPIMP...HA HA HA - The things this old lady is saying is PRICELESS!
Jeff really mustn't have waiting too long - because Bogg was right behind him! Now I know why 'smart kids give him a pain'...LOL
How sad that was for Mrs. Curie and for Jeff - that certainly was a Life's Lesson Learned for him, but Bogg's right, can't change history from how its written. Even if it seems unfair. :(
p.s. The Voyager Times huh?LOL! ;) |
 spencerthekat 2008-06-02 . chapter 8Boy Malone really wants to keep his location a secret huh? NOt like the boys couldn't have counted their steps to get back there if need be.
So glad to see that the slight of hand trick worked. Now lets hope that Malone & his crew get what's coming to 'em from stealing the diamond and all the other treasure they have hidden!
This was a great chapter - lots of suspense! :) |
 spencerthekat 2008-06-02 . chapter 7What a smart idea that Lord Francis had about using some slight of hand to exchange the real & fake one. I hope it works for them! :O Interesting that someone knew that the one in his study was the fake - This has to be an inside job! |
 spencerthekat 2008-06-02 . chapter 6Wow everyone is really afraid of 'The Boss' huh? Even big bad Doyle is shaking in his boots! Bogg with the gangster speak if wicked funny. Almost like he's right out of a movie from the 40's. Phinny makes for a good 'heavy'!
Can wait to see how they get the big rock back!
p.s. Let's Make a Deal~ HA HA HA...DENNIS! :) |
 Mrs.Phineas Bogg 2008-06-02 . chapter 7Dennis, I would seriously consider putting this story under Adventure/Humor! LOL..I do it all the time!
And ANOTHER beautiful opening and description of sunrise and nature outside the mansion and the action inside! This is a Mansion, you think Mr. Hope could have given Jeff his OWN room! Doh!
LOL..Bogg is 'hypnotized.' Don't let Jeffrey empty out that noggin, who knows what could fly in there! See! I told ya Jeff was gonna get tossed into something and it won't be funny!..well, it was..but ya know! Lord Francis is sitting at the breakfast table with water dripping onto his eggs and head, now where did that come from? Must be a flood upstairs! LOL..
"How complicated!" It sure is, all these Yahoos stealing the diamond!
Okay, so Lord Francis thinks Bogg is Harry Houdini now...I hope he CAN pull it off! What a plot! Dennis, have you DONE this before?? LOL. It's nice to see Jeffrey is mature enough to make his own decisions. Cool chapter. |
 Mrs.Phineas Bogg 2008-06-02 . chapter 6Oy, never a good idea to go into an abandoned Warehouse! Scary! I'd be hesitating too..but only if I could hold onto Bogg's waistband, LOL! Jeffrey, when are you gonna learn you are talking to a guy who was BORN in 1720 and plucked from obscurity in possibly 1745..he's NOT gonna know what Monty Python is!
ROFLOL! Bogg called him out! HE NEVER does explain Later! LOL..Look at Jeffrey being so calm about capture, 'umm..Bogg..umm.." LOL..
The name Phinny ALWAYS works, you'll see. roflol. So is this Cockney!Bogg or Newyork!Bogg? LOL.Sounds like New Yawk ta me! Lookit Jeffrey, HAMMING it up! I'd give him the 'I think that's enough look' too. Jeffrey's got a big cake hole! That's for sure! OMG! He kicked him in his bum! LOL. Good thing they made it out alive...funny jokes at the end there! |
 Morgan Elizebeth Jacobs 2008-06-02 . chapter 10Great story. I was just wondering if you're ever gonna write one that Jeffrey isn't a kid. |
 spencerthekat 2008-06-01 . chapter 5How nice...Butler Service...lol I have a few things I need cleaned and pressed, can I throws those in? LOL Beau Brummel - GET OUT! I bet they looked spiffy in those outfits. The 'SILVER & GOLD' plan...ROFLOL. I hope that they find the people that they have the diamond in Fleur de Lis.
O*M*G "But remember there’s no need to fear, ‘cause Phineas Bogg is here!” ROFLOL - UNDERDOG...LMBOPIMP! Can't believe that Bogg's trying out the whole gangster routine to get info from Big Al! Can't wait to read on and see what happens with Doyle! |
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