'kick'

oops! I just kicked saix's ass...

i couldn't help it! i like larxne...

On better terms, your writing style is uber cool.

yay! roxas! we shall need some namine*takes her out of the closet I hid her in*

Nice. Very nice. Does this lead up to Chain of Memories and the Kingdom Hearts II?

Oh, and I saw the KHII manga. O.O They look so wierd;). Roxas looked adorable, Axel awesome, Sora...uh...was wierd.

LOVE IT! If there was a way to sing that opera style in typing I would do it! You are amazing Firebloom! This story just keeps getting better and better! I love the friendship between Lark and Axel.

Your story is quite humorous too. And I have to agree that Zexion's name has a ring to it. Makes you want to say over and over again at least ten different ways.

I'm looking forward the dawn, and the plan that will sweep the stars away;)

Watching shadows melt the light, another space is ours

alone tonight..watching shadows melt. i love listening to the cure while reading a new chappie from you. this is shorter than what you usually give us, but im not complaining. another delightful update. its not as dark as some of the earlier chapters, this is a play on light grey, i think. there is a hopeful tone in the end, and smexy axel always sneaks some playfulness in there.

im expecting "something" to happen in the next chap. the waves havent come yet, but i cant wait to read the part where they break.

ps. in the previous chapter, i thought it was really clever of you to include Mulan's father in there. there are definetly parallels between her and Larxene.

Awesome chapter.

Oh, the traitors unite. On a mission no less. xD

Interesting Chapter, Loved how you describe Marluxia.

Amazing chapter. I felt like crying toward the end. D:

Aww, that made me kinda sad. Very desciptive Chapter.

Aw, poor guy, he was hoping she'd be the one to mend his heart...

He's not gonna turn into a heartless, is he...?

very cool, i like how you inserted hints of larxel in some parts. the story is very interesting, the first chapter intrigued me right away. a unique plot and concept based on the common only woman scenario. cant wait to see more update this summer!

Wow, I'm surpirsed Larxene did drink the poison...and yet I am not XD Can't wait to see what world it's going to be.

O, she really showed Saix, didn't she? :D

Is this going to continue up to Chain of Memories? Or is it going to stop before it?

Awesome xD

Haha, saix is not match for Larxene :P

Aweome job, I love how you word things, it just makes everything sound... smart. xD

Keep up the great job, and update soon!

Sky

Wow...poison...are you sure you want to drink it Larxene?