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bikechickvan
2009-12-05 . chapter 28
I realize now by reading the dates on your story that this was finished last year - but I finally got around to reading it after making a note of it from someone - AG003 I think - and am very impressed!
I think your characters are very true to the way they would behave as SM wrote them, I love your writing style, it's very polished, and kudos to whoever beta'd you, not a spelling mistake in sight!
I really enjoy the vamp stories but if you have an AH one coming out I would love to read it. I will check out your author profile and see if it's already up.
Thanks again for this great story and I hope new readers continue to discover it.
hippogriff-tamer
2009-11-29 . chapter 28
I thoroughly enjoyed this story and seeing things from Edward's perspective.. I was shocked that Aro would change her after what happened in New Moon but then again he thought she had a gift and he likes to collect vampires with gifts but wouldn't he have known that she was a shield in a way..that that was her gift? I mean at the end of New Moon he says something to the affect of her gift..But I liked how Bella always knew deep down that about Edward, that she had the same/similar responses she had when she was a human like laying in his embrace..things like that...anyways really liked the story...thanks for sharing.

HT
conversechic666
2009-11-27 . chapter 28
Really great story
ozchickcullen
2009-11-25 . chapter 27
This is a really great unique well written story. Bella with amnesia is so sweet and I loved the fact that she remembered Edward leaving her in the woods near her house.
My favourite line "You're my husband Edward be with me." I died.
A Fantastic read thanks!
KissinCullens
2009-11-24 . chapter 27
I loved this story. No needless rambling, boring filler chapters, ooc nonsense.

And i really liked your choice for Bella's gift. Talk about a dream come true for any man fortunate enough to be on the receiving end of it. Edward goes from being sexually repressed for 100yrs to being the envy of his brothers, i have no doubt.

Thanks.
ecullen'sgirl
2009-11-21 . chapter 28
I did truly enjoy reading this orginial story. I have read a lot of FF (I'm addicted now) since April '09, and I haven't read another story with this theme that is as well written. I have read Midnight Desire and enjoyed it very much as well. Keep up the great writing!
iluvpynk
2009-11-20 . chapter 28
Wow. That was a GREAT story! I think that you deserve WAY more reviews! =D

And continue writing stories! ;)
alycaly
2009-11-10 . chapter 18
I am loving this story!! Poor Edward..how devastating.
Snuze
2009-11-01 . chapter 27
Bravo! *crowds cheering*

That was really so beautiful to read, thought provoking, flawlessly in canon, inspiring and very addictive.

thanks so much
Snuze
2009-11-01 . chapter 19
This is so beautifully written! I have been so absorbed, it has taken me up to now to review - sorry! I haven't seen any spelling mistakes, which is such a pleasure! You have created a lovely story and the characterisation is really good.
AngelaSampedro99
2009-10-24 . chapter 28
I had read Midnight Desire and wanted to check out the other stories you had written. You definitely did not disappoint! My favorite story of the Twilight series has always been Midnight Sun even though uncompleted... you have filled the void the nicely. You are an excellent writter and I hope you continue to bestow us with some more of your creative stories soon! :)
1853kaz
2009-10-23 . chapter 1
Really enjoy your work. Intelligent, creative, with a good balance of characterisation and plot. Thank you for the pleasure!
GroovyExcel
2009-10-12 . chapter 27
Bella's gift is AWESOME!
GroovyExcel
2009-10-12 . chapter 26
YAY!
GroovyExcel
2009-10-11 . chapter 25
*leads a parade*
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