I really like your story, I am anxious to read Bella's reaction to being home.

Finally, she's back with him. Yes! Hopefully, he can help her remember. Update!

Although, I'm disappointed in Edward not being the one to change Bella, I'd like to see where you're going to take this story. Keep writing.

Very intense story, I am looking forward to more of your story. I really like it so far.

The volturi snatched her up? No! Bring her back soon?

I really liked that. You write in EPOV well. The idea to the story sounds interesting already. Good work.