Great story - but it's not complete. Please come back and finish it for us.

Great chapter! I cant wait til you update. I hope you bring in some Ziva though.

I hope your planning on finishing this! It's good! I would like to see how it turns out!

Ok I love this story. Usually I don't really like M rated, but this is hot. Plus it's easy to read, ie good English and no skipping around and confusing the readers

great story! I was going to do one with a similar opening so I'm glad I read yours first and didn't embarass myself! Nicely done and I liked the way you took some of the stories from the show and turned it to fit your story.

Renee

Update soon? Have you forgotten about this story? I want some more Gibbs and Abby. I want to know what happens. Will the baby be a boy? Will it be a girl?

Update Please?

please keep going!

I love Love Love it :) DiNozzo sitting there prolly scared out of his mind for Abby and for the Gibbs wrath that would come down on his head. He must have been scared enough that Abby got hurt his little sis. Great Job writing Ducky and Gibbs. Can't wait for more of course I love the fact that you didn't keep us waiting because you could have so Thank you so much.

oh my goodness what kind of hell is tony going to pay for this. Abby was in danger and Gibbs is prolly not going to be happy with this event at all.

Hugs, Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Wow! that was strong! poor Abs and Tony

ha! ha! that was cute :-)

Great Job, Great two chapters I was so into it that I didn't get a chance to leave a review for chapter 11 but I really and truly liked them both.. Can't wait to read more it's so good that he can let his emotions out around her. It's something i hope to see more of on the show. She can make him smile and feel I think. Kinda wish they would tell more about how Abby came to work for him... Write more soon.

Aw that was sweet! please keep writing

OH my goodness oh my goodness... Whe yippee! Wow Abby dashed outta there pretty fast :) Great Job I can't wait for more ;)

Hugs and much anticipation for the next chapters.

Kelly

oh! What a sneaky Ducky!