Reviews for Sound of a Jinchuuriki

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2008-10-06 ch 15, anon.	abuse“Fine. Ahem... Ninja Harem no jutsu!” -using his jutsu against him, that's just not cool
EDelta88 2008-10-05 ch 14,	abusetill the sandman he comes!-and gaara's in town, nice Oddly enough, no one was even going near Hakari-of course they're not, they're crazy not suicidal Haku doing a suplex, now that's a hilairious mental image Haku and temari going out to dinner, this should be good AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAH, getting Hinata and Yugito out for his verginity that great “Team eight,” Kakashi said with a glare in his eye. “These are the forms for the Chunin exams. Sign them.”-oh he is most deffinitly trying to kill them “...Talentless idiot,” 0_0 Shino throwing insults...ok where did I put the key to the fallout shelter three gennin with Chidori, oh damn “AGH! I'LL MOUNT HIS HEAD ON MY WALL!”-my stomach is sore Itachi held up a gold coin and flipped it behind him. Kakuzu jumped for it. -I am going to-OH SHINY! that last scene of "How I Made Orochimaru Quit" brilliant
EDelta88 2008-10-05 ch 13,	abuseROTFLMAO Gaara torturing Shukaku that's awesome Who knows, maybe those Leaf will keep searching forever. Then we won't have to go home.”-or you could join Naruto's crew(which is where my moey is) As the sun was setting, a chilling tone reached across the harbor. It came from a small brigantine that had pulled in that very day. It was a guitar that ached the hearts of everyone there. And slowly, a violin joined in. The two voices sang across the water, calling to those that had died while at sea. Instruments from ships all through the port joined in until a full orchestra played. Then they stopped, leaving the guitar to finish the last string.-bravo, truely poetic Naruto with a winchester, god help the sorry bastard that screws with him now. You add Kage Bunshin to that and you have infinite amo as long as the original doesn't fire his and has chakra, it would be the firing line from hell so the guns aren't going to be big, crap I was really looking forward to the reaction when an army of Narutos whipped out their guns
EDelta88 2008-10-05 ch 12,	abuse“...But I'm older and...”-poor yugito the flag seems off
EDelta88 2008-10-05 ch 11,	abuse“They going to keep the Three Tails as a pet?-I certainly hope so, three Jinchuuriki and a tailed beast working together, that would be so sweet it's not even funny “Slaughter, slaughter, total slaughter... I won't leave a single man alive.” -I like that toad “Mark the tides and hoist the sail, we make for the sea. We seek adventure, blood is our trail, on this lost sea,” -did I mention that I like that toad “Our chances of success in our mission is almost assured without him aboard.”-ah the fatal mistake of all Naruto stories, underestimating Naruto
EDelta88 2008-10-05 ch 8,	abuseAfter all, even limbs are replaceable for us,-first time someone has said that that I know of I feel so sorry for Zabuza
EDelta88 2008-10-04 ch 6,	abuseit's so sad when scenes get misinterpreted like that(the hug) I like how you introduced Yugito hm mysterious figure giving Hiashi power interestng
EDelta88 2008-10-04 ch 5,	abuse“But we can't both have her,” Naruto said,-says who he needs to get a guitar that he can use as a melee weapon Hiashi had Hinata's limp body against the wall by her throat.-even among rapists and murderers there is a rule "mess with kids and you die" I don't plan on killing Hinata.-good because she's pretty much the only character that I can't stand dieing, as far as the weakness for shy girls, I know what you mean I'm the same way
EDelta88 2008-10-04 ch 4,	abusego team 8, putting Kaka thru the ringer
EDelta88 2008-10-04 ch 2,	abuseI love that song,the seven sins prank just made it better so can he pull a Pete Townson and brain people with that guitar “I am a dead man if Rin finds out.” dude death is the least of your worries
Lexor 2008-10-03 ch 24,	abusethis is really good, and its about time they met up again!
Jeikobu Kyoudai-teiru 2008-10-01 ch 24,	abusenice, I like your story a lot, good luck with the next chapter.
Kasek 2008-10-01 ch 24,	abuseYou, er, kind of switched Talon's name to Talinth. Talinth is the Heron princess, not the dragon girl. And Talon seems like she's gotten over her fear of men rather quickly...
Xynth 2008-10-01 ch 24,	abuseRule number 1: NEVER mess with Gaara in a desert, lmao. Jesus, just imagine how big Shukaku could get with all the sand in Alabasta. And one thing, I'd LOVE to see a fight between Crocodile and Gaara, that would be SO badass. Great chapter, and thank you for putting in Gaara's scene, Sandman hasn't been getting a lot of love lately and he's one of the coolest characters in the whole series. Seriously, "You made it rain needles...I'll make it rain blood!" THAT Gaara was cool, now he's a less-hyper and emotionless Naruto knock-off. Anyways, good chapter, keep it up!
Cyberbeta 2008-09-30 ch 24,	abuseI found this before and could not get past the first chapter. I figure I was in a wierd mood because I just sat and read the entire thing after a second glance. Things look to be comming to a head, and I bet "Davy Jones" is the leader of the late Ashinard and his men. As more crew members arrive to Luffy's crew in the manga, will you edit the crew interactions in the chapters that they have made appearances in?

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