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SNN
2008-06-27 . chapter 1
Hehe, this was adorable. I got confused at some points, but that's prolly cos my sleeping schedule's all wacky due to it being summer n everything. =] Great job!
Silverian Rose
2008-06-10 . chapter 1
that was good, totally loved it!

though i feel hurt, i dont get to do any flash flics! lol... i guess i will survive the pain, but i do love it!!
bsloths
2008-06-02 . chapter 1
This was great! I loved how Casey was taking the problems in Grease as a personal issue. (Because really, that part always bugged me. Why did they have to feed into the labels in order to be together? They were leaving high school anyway, when all that stuff no longer becomes important. But I digress.)

I think it's very Casey to worry about whether she should become more like one of "Derek's girls." And I loved all the secondary characters in this, too. Great job!
carterfinley
2008-06-02 . chapter 1
Hahaha, oh my, that was super cute and hilarious. I loved it. Derek is so adorable here. :)
bahjcb
2008-06-02 . chapter 1
That was adorable! I loved the Dasey talk at the end. I also loved Derek's use of big words. LOL! Really, that was a great story!
jeytonlover
2008-06-02 . chapter 1
“Danny and Sandy in the summer, they were good… you – you feel like summer all the time.”

If he hadn’t been sure about the extent of his feelings, he’d be sure as hell now.

The two lines above were enough for me. I'm serious they were perfect, just like the whole story. I'm serious perfect! I couldn't have imagined anything this wonderful when I wrote the prompt.

I think it's hilarious that we got each other for flashfic, but I have to say you win. My story doesn't even come close to this!

Straight to my favorites it goes!
Moonlit-Jeannie
2008-06-02 . chapter 1
Oh my gosh, I loved it! Derek always has to have the last word, doesn't he? And Ralph and everyone else were just pure love, as was this fic in general. Shellie's going to love it! Great job and thanks again for participating! :)

...I'm beginning to think I'll never finish mine from last round. It disappeared. ^^;
driter
2008-06-02 . chapter 1
A-MAZING. Loved it! I'm usually not a huge fan of already-dating-Dasey's but you just write them so well. I loved the way you weaved in the Grease theme (which, ironically, I once had a long debate about in one of my drama classes) and all the supporting characters were great (even 'Mattie'). Great plot, great characters, just great.
Brit
2008-06-02 . chapter 1
"You feel like summer all the time."

Enough said.
ponderer
2008-06-02 . chapter 1
Fabulous! I loved the idea that Casey would change for Derek, as he would for her, and that it scared her that she would.

Great job!

“And really, you’d be encumbering my reputation if I ever let you wear this baby.” -- Best ending, ever. :)
pheobe p.
2008-06-02 . chapter 1
Yay! this was so good! It was sweet and angsty at the same time -- not an easy thing to pull off but you did it. Loved it! :) pheobe
ellie141516
2008-06-02 . chapter 1
this was really good! i loved how derek had changed for casey! i thought it was soo sweet! and how derek could still be a complete ** to matt and even included "encumbering" lol! hope to read more of your storises soon!
True Love Lives Forever
2008-06-02 . chapter 1
Good job, as usual. I hope to hear from you soon again (new one-shot, I mean).
Stessa
2008-06-01 . chapter 1
I enjoyed it. Very much.

Actually - I loved everything about it.
argentenipinkini
2008-06-01 . chapter 1
haha, loved the last line! oh derek. i loved the involvement of emily in this story and i thought your overall idea from the prompt was good. of course casey would freak out about something as ridiculous a grease. it just seems like something she WOULD do, haha. and i think you captured that well.
good job!
ps, though-- a girl is blonde. a boy is blond.
(The blond shook her head in disbelief.--> The blonde shook her head in disbelief.)
:]
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