I like the authenticity of the dialogue. ^-^ This is exactly how I would imagine Yusuke and his mother would be talking about Keiko. Although maybe there'd be more cursing and vulgar language, hehe. But still, nice exchange. You managed to bring out fluff indirectly -- which is a skill few fic authors learned. Good work! ^.^ Hooray for YusKei love!

This was very cute. There aren't enough mother/son fics out there. I love Atsuko!

hehe, very nice. I can see the two having this conversation =)

Ah, that was cute. A nice vignette, very well written. =D

Short but nice :)