Very nice! ^_^ I think it's a great fic!

This was poignant, and kinda sad... but not, because the Robustelli's got resolution. It's like Carmine said... it would have been worse for them to still not know what happened to Janelle. So, sad but not sad.

Loved Brennan's hesitation in the church until she saw Booth. That's so Brennan to be awkward. And so Brennan to scoff at what the priest said.

And that final line... perfect. He's willing to give her forever. Nice.

Yes! They've admitted their feelings for each other! And bonus...they kissed. But damn that cell phone for interrupting.
I love it when he calls her by her first name, always have.

You've captured their personalities so well, so well I can really hear them speak the words. I could hear Booth say "I'm calling bull shit" and Brennan beginning to say she doesn't know what it means.

This was funny:

“It’s your name, isn’t it?” He felt as if he were back in school, being scolded by one of the nuns for calling her ‘Dude’.

Although I never called a nun "dude", I do remember the fear of getting called onto the carpet by one.

Gaw! Totally cute. That last line was adorable.

But where is Greg? Where is he?!

I miss him.

You and your crossovers not being crossovery enough.

Just kidding. It was an incredible story. Absolutely wonderful. :) Really, truly, honestly.

I hope you believe me on how wonderful it was.

This one had an odd air of Grissom and Sara. Intentional? Not intentional?

It really did. Especially that bit near the end. It could have been a blatant allusion to the whole "Do you trust me?" "Intimately" bit from uh...? I duno. I don't know my GSR.

But, now he's all kissing her and stuff. Yay! Booth and Bones grew as characters! Wewt!

Ep. So close to the end.

And Bones has emotions?! Blasphemy!

Kidding. Kidding. I actually have no idea if she does or not. This was adorable.

Sorry my reviews are sucking... I'm trying. :) And, at least you know I'm reading.

*Snuggles up to Greg and Aaron*

I love CSI that much I'll snuggle them both.

Greg especially.

You think he's gonna get his book published ever? Damn Warrick picking a bad time to die.

This chapter was eerie. I've been sitting here catching up with my friend Lynne and trying to figure out just exactly what to say about this chapter. How can I describe it?

It's eerie. That's what I've come up with.

And I love it because it's eerie. And I find that absolutely amazing. It's like the very essence of the eerieness of this chapter has made it so much better. I don't even know why it's so odd to me, but it is. And, I love it.

Probably the best yet!

“Greg, if there's one thing in this God forsaken world that's worth a damn, it's the efficiency of this lab, and the determination of the FBI. I swear on everything I have, Aaron James will pay for what he did to Janelle Robustelli.”


Them's fighting words.

Is he really like that? This is the second time I've found myself insanely attracted to that man in your story. Is it just the way you write him? Is he really that freaking sexy? I mean, he's still Angel to me... and not attractive in the least when I watch the show. (On the rare occasions that I do). But in your fic... uhghhshs.

He's just... sexy.

I like Angela.

Does she really exist? Have you invented her? I have no clue.

I still like her.

I really love her character. You know, the definition of the word that speaks of how much morality a person has? Or some shiz like that. I've grown very fond of her in the past few chapters. I have absolutely no clue if she's an oc or not... but it oddly doesn't matter. I almost want to watch the show to find out, but I think I'd fear I'd be too unhappy if she didn't exist.

I want to be her friend. I like her. She's a good character. Whatever you're doing, you're doing something right.

This is all.

So, oddly enough it was the first and the last lines of this chapter that really got me.

Last line: I once read a quote from Nicholas Sparks, who I disliked immensely until that point. Then, I couldn't help but respect him. I can't find the exact quote but it was something about how he'd never write adultery or rape. I couldn't help but ponder over the prospect of leaving those two things out of my writing indefinitely. Adultery I'm more open to, but rape I'm not. The very presence of the term makes me think, really, really, think. I think it's heinous and it give an effect to a story that it couldn't reach without it.

Good or bad? I have no idea.

The first line? Well, I'm going to be all Kazish on you. You think I'm going to go into the psychological profile of people who are notably neat? No. I'm going Kazish not LLKish. :)

Isn't it weird how in television? On CSI especially, all of the victims and suspects have such perfectly clean houses? I have a pile of dishes in my sink, a livingroom carpet that desperately needs vacuuming, and dirty clothes all over my bedroom and bathroom. Am I an especially messy person? By television's standards I am.

Also, you notice how people on TV never have any clutter out? I mean, gosh... what would I do with my things if I lived like that? I mean... I don't have enough space. I have dishware that gets stored on my counters, art on the walls, my mops and brooms live in a corner. I have a box in the front room that holds all the leashes, medicine, and other animal care stuff. And there are dvd's and board games lining my shelves in the living room.

I know I'm just using myself as an example... but why are people always depicted as so incredibly neat? Nobody on CSI would have noticed if a victim or suspect's house was neat. They expect it... it's the messy people (like me I guess, though I kinda think I'm pretty tidy) that they remark on. Are they the same way on Bones? I always assume as much.

Okay, I've said enough.

September 25th is my grandmother's birthday. She turned 95 in 2007. Just a funny little tidbit of LLK knowledge. Also Jess (sister in law) turned 21 on 09-25-07. I bet you didn't know that either!

Anyway, I think this one was probably my favorite in the cute shippy sense. Since I don't know any better I find myself pulling for Booth and Bones to get together. Your little frined with her "figure it out" conversation she had with him was saying what I wanted to. I liked that.

Uh, and I liked the way you wrote the whole thing with her listing off her reasons. Naming each finger, in a very non-technical way was interesting and really cute. It made me read the paragraph twice becuase it left an impact.

Nice job, kid.

Sorry I was late reviewing this. =(

I guess it must feel pretty good right now to know you've finished a chapter fic! Everything in this story was so well planned, and you should write more case fics more often; it read just like an episode of Bones.

Your last line was just... *squee* It was perfect.

Good job, and I hope school is going okay.

A really great story!

Probably one of the best Bones fanfictions i have read and i hope to read more from you!

Beautiful chapter. Loved the ending. :)