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irishdancerfromroi 2008-08-06 ch 8,	abuseHah. Your "contest" has forced me to review! Really, I'm very sorry for not reviewing earlier. bonks self in head It's a cute story so far! Always brightens my day when I see it's been updated. :) All the "grown-ups" as kittens/teenagers/what have you are great fun. It's just...a very nice story! It's written well (always a plus), and about one of my favorite pairings (Deme/Munkus), with a good dash of the rest of the characters and a few OC's. Nothing that's not to like, if you'll excuse the confusing double negative. ;P RosmarinexCoricopat, lessee. Rosemapat. Nah, that looks funny. Cormarine. Well, that looks funny too. But try sayin' 'em out loud, they sound a lot better than the look! (Er...or I think they do, at least...) "Corrine" maybe? Well...my three suggestions...not that I have any stories in this section at this time. Ah well!
Owlboy 2008-08-06 ch 8,	abuseReally great! Keep up the good work! Didn't see much of anything wrong. And hows Rosopat?
Owlboy 2008-08-05 ch 7,	abuseWow, that was without the best story ever! You forgot to capitalize a few words, but that was it. I really like your word use, and the deatils weren't to much. It is much better to have to much, than not enough.
Missa Catlover 2008-07-16 ch 7,	abuseGreat Story! I really enjoyed it i can't wait to find out what happens next! please update soon
Rubidia 2008-07-15 ch 7,	abusehaha, three cheers for Mungojerrie! Love that cat! Him & his sister. They have cockney accents! What could be cooler than a cockney accent? Not much, I say! Ok, ok, done acting like a three year old here. :) Keep going! It's getting to the good part!...Not that it's not all good, but...well...awkward pause lets just go with the term 'climax'. Yes, that's better. Anywho, update soon!
Rubidia 2008-07-15 ch 6,	abuseNice update! Love the Mungoteazer scenario! I think my fave part was: “So who is i’?” Jerrie burst out, not wanting to wait any longer. “Oh nobody…just someone with yellow eyes and blue-gray fur…” Jerrie’s brows drew together in confusion. “Oopsacat wants to ask me-?” lol, that was hilarious! Update soon, coming along great!
Rubidia 2008-06-20 ch 5,	abuseI'm finding myself getting sucked in, yet again! Oh, poor old Coricopat! But I guess they'll probably get together at the ball when Rose is mercilessly denied by Munku and his bonnie lass. :)
Rubidia 2008-06-19 ch 4,	abuseIt's me again. I'm excited about your story! It's getting good! Oh, I hope Rose doesn't take Munkustrap away from Demeter! I really like Rose, and feel bad for her, but I love the Demunku pair! Oh, I kind of liked that nickname! Demunku. It works. I'll have to use that in a fic. Anywho, keep going. I want to know how it ends! By the way, very nice OC's!
Rubidia 2008-06-18 ch 3,	abuseOh, great portrayal of Coricopat and Tantomile! They've never actually been parts or fics I've read. They've just been mysteries who hardly ever verbalized. So, no one ever really knows what goes on inside their heads. But I like this! Good characters, they could go far. USE THEM!
Rubidia 2008-06-18 ch 1,	abuseHooked again! I've gotta stop doing that. Soon I'll be reading, like, 70 fics! Anywho, my guess is Rose likes Misto, but is afriad to say so because she thinks that her best friend is with him. Either him or Munk. But, I could be completely wrong. I guess I'll find out soon, though! That'd be cool if I was right though! I like cookies! :) just kidding!
spirit o' the greenwood 2008-06-17 ch 3, anon.	abuseyou wanted a review so here it is. i love this story! it makes me squeal!
Queen Em 2008-06-11 ch 3,	abuseI'm not so good at the critism, I tend to only say what I like, hope thats ok. I like the way you describe Tanto and Cori, like you said in mine, they are a difficult pair to write. although perhaps Tugger was a little too rude, I see him more as cheeky than cruel, is that a little constructive? Anyway, I really hope there is some more Dem/Munk action in the next chapter, I love them and I think this story is going to get better and better x
Queen Em 2008-06-11 ch 2,	abuseAw, that is Munk through and through, I loved how he was so polite during the game "would you like to be it"! I also love how this sort of foreshadows the Dem/Munk relationship we know and love! x
Queen Em 2008-06-11 ch 1,	abuseI feel I should write a longer review after all the lovely things you have said about mine, but I'm afraid all I have to say is how much I like it! I like the teenage girl quality they have and I think it will be very interesting to see what will happen, and if Demeter will tell them! Off to read some more! x
zerOtodona 2008-06-04 ch 1,	abuseBravo again, L. I won't guess because I like your story to much to mess up the endings or whatever you want to call it. ^.^ Peace and love! Up-date soon, too.

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