Reviews for One Mistake
Allimba 12/7/11 . chapter 7
Awesome story! I hope you continue!
jenefaner 11/22/11 . chapter 7
I would really like to see you pick this back up. Its a very intriguing story! I really love your OFC; her interaction with VC is both amusing and hot. The concept that their mutual best ever one night stand created a 'cub' and they are now forced to figure out how to live with each other is riveting. I really like that Victor wants and is trying to become a sort of family man. This story deserves to be finished, please! :D
Carlypso 8/20/10 . chapter 7
I love this story, i can't wait to find out more!
BrownEyedDevil 4/30/10 . chapter 7
I don't know why I have been so stupid to never look for any Sabretooth fics all this time, he's aƶways been one of the characters I've been fascinated by the most-aside from Wolverine of course :P

Really enjoyed reading this. I normally do not like OCs, especially the female kind, but you don't make her sound like just another Mary Sue but a new, well thought out character. The bond between her and Victor is fascinating and I really enjoyed reading these seven chapters in nearly one sitting. Can't wait to read more!
NagainaFier 4/1/10 . chapter 7
Nagi hopes this message spurrs you to post more faster :) Not bad for a plot filler... YAY FOR ACTION! (both naughty and non naughty alike...)
Stephanie M. A 3/30/10 . chapter 7
Loving this fic. Two ferals together? Hot. I don't know why, but I have a weirdly soft spot for Victor when he's written nicely and you are writing his character very nicely.

Can't wait for more ;)
gaarakabuto 3/20/10 . chapter 7
I really like that this story has more of a reality feel and not one of those too good to be true kind of things. It really makes the reader get into the story. Also, I hate reading stories where the main character is pregnant or has a kid because I can't relate, but strangely that doesn't bother me in this story.

Amazing work on this chapter! I can't wait for the next update! Keep up the good work!

GaaraKabuto (Sara)
GypsyWitchBaby 3/19/10 . chapter 7
great chapter! really riveting! love how creed is realistically and slowly changing and that they're haven't immediately gotten back together yet. can't wait for more!
ninjamonkey20 3/19/10 . chapter 7
I was so excited to see you had updated and the chapter was wonderful! I love the tension between them. I can't wait for them to get together.
Sam Wiise Gamjii 3/15/10 . chapter 6
i love the story! update soon ;)
JJ-Jefferu 3/13/10 . chapter 6
ilike your story. the way victor is acting [[his thinking]] and his conversation with xavier are how a lot of people feel all the time. sorry if this is a horrible review.
NicoleMarie 3/11/10 . chapter 6
Please, please continue!
GypsyWitchBaby 3/11/10 . chapter 6
wonderful chapter! so happy you updated again, i did a little happy dance when i got the alert notice. can't wait to read more this is such an amazing story!
Lady Minuialwen 11/11/09 . chapter 5
Update more please.
Hotaru Arashi 7/11/09 . chapter 5
love the plotline, have to admit that Victor Creed having a son is pretty interesting. Good job with getting them all in character, and love Alyson's attitude.

keep working, I want to know what happens next.
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